One piece : voyager

You should work on getting a translator for your story because the Chinese energy is showing more and more in the new chapters still if a person could work around reading Chinese sayings this story is not that bad

First time working on a book ..... so comments and reviews are very much appreciated.... so that i could learn to do better

MC: "my system gives me things if I travel to other islands... what do I do? I spend months on the same island" Honestly, the moment he joined the navy was the moment when the story went downhill for me, not least because it was forbidden to teach rokushiki to the MC....

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Esta es mi primera reseña, y la escribo en español jajajaja pero la historia me gusta bastante, el personaje es interesante y el sistema no es constante lo cual me parece muy genial, ya que no se vuelve OP de solo estar en una isla y recibir cosas muy OP

Top 5 op novel in my opinion it's so we'll done .....iIlove the mc but pls i NEED MORE CH

Please update i really like this fanfic.

It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! 😁👍👍 This story little different from canon (butterfly effect from MC present).. I like that.. Good translate with just a little wrong grammar.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍👍

Honestly it is not a 5 stars because a lot of times the end of the chapters is very anticlimactic but it is still a very good story. The concept of the system is very interesting and very op. I think the character is too op unless he hits a bottle neck soon or a nerf I think he would be very op by the time Luffy starts as a pirate, considering he is matching rear admirals when he is 10. But then again Luffy and his crue went from struggling to beat the buggy pirates to beating CP9 and surviving a buster call in some months so may e they will be able to catch up.

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It's a good start to a story with good, if not great, potential. As the MC develops, I hope the author doesn't forget to develop some romance because, let's be honest, we all have our waifus we want to have. Now I'm NOT saying make a harem, but we all want a life partner, be it in reality or in a story. Again, I'm not saying write R 18 scene. Just show he has people he cares for on more than just a childish level, like it was my favorite anime character.

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This story is legit trash lol like nothing that I can say can make this story seem begger because it’s that bad lol

is it harem ? whether it is or not please make Robin main interest!

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Hi, its seems you have dropped this fanfiction and I saw that this was a translation. I was hoping you could give a link or something to the original. Thanks

This was a really good read I definitely need more