Reviews of One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Esto es simplemente GOD, no me habia sentido tan emocionado leyendo un libro desde Reborn a Enel, Bro si puedes Terminarlo a tu propio ritmo por que yo seguirle leyendolo. (Ya es como la 4 vez que lo vuelvo a releerlo).

alright am 345 chapters in , you love one piece ? read this , the au is strong , you are in good hands with this author

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very interesting and enjoyable read still embracing the Luffy character while also making it his own version one criticism is the chapters are a bit short but the writer makes up with that by releasing 2 a day I really recommend people read this is a very good read

since this is ‘Real Life’ difficulty, will his crew also change? we cannot sure that he'll sail and meet other characters precisely similar with original based level selected. Also, will he form a gang that will become member in Goa Kingdom (like Grey Terminal's kid, original character)? also normally, someone won't using small boat like Luffy did especially guy who cannot swim.

Just for the fact that you gave "Whitebeard" an actual White Beard, five stars. Bravo...

The grammar is on point, and there are rarely mistakes, and even then, nothing major. The only thing I can't stand is the slow pace. I am at chapter 26 and the MC hasn't even started his journey but is still training on Dawn island. Boring af

Nami is first .who will be next.Robin.?maybe Vivi.?.I hope MC will have a lover later one

Are thare Lemons.?.Is this a Harem.?.I wana ask.since Most One Piece FF have it.

I love this fan-fic....Please solve this Monkey D. Mario naming problem of the Marines.Also Please let Luffy learn Hassoken,King Punch,Red Hawk,Conqueror Coating,Emission and Internal Destruction,Diable Jambe (Red Hawk Kick Version),Also recruit Yamato and Carrot (maybe Ulti) in the crew along with the original crew....please don't recruit Buggy,Gin (debatable),Collect a lot of different dials from Skypia like Impact,Tone,,Reject,Axe,Flame,Ball,Breath,Eisen,Milky,Flash,Heat,Flavor,Jet,Lamp,Vision,Thunder,Control,Mad,Water etc. Dials and make upgraded Thousand Sunny.Also let a lot of characters like Bell-mere,Titi,Olivia,Hiriluk,Tom,Otohime,Rosinante,Lami (Law's sister),Sora,Toki etc. be alive in future.Also let luffy collect Pure Gold and also let a lot of movie part be in It....I really love the fic...keep up the good work and release more chapters much faster.

the only negative things of this fanfic are the pacing and the chapter lenght.

The beginning is quite slow and there are many modifications to luffy that do not quite stick and nami has never been one of my favorites as a love interest. Other than that, it's a great story, canonical personalities, good comedy, realistic dreams, and a good personality and charisma.

The story is good, there are some issues with the personalities, but other than that it's a great one piece story. things to look forward to: the first 31 chapters are all about luffy's training and how he learns the skills of the navy and the use of weapons

i love this fanfic so far i hope you don't drop it

🤔😲Whitebeard having a beard seems legit😆

Hey author, can you I make a request? Make a one piece story, with Sinbad's powers on seeing the flow of destiny/fate idk.As well as his personality? lol

I Never read a one piece fanfic better than this one, this one is really awesome, i dono think i could read a better one even if i search for one for a year

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This story is unfortunately a harem which author hide it for some reasons. It's also a self insert luffy who is almost like 180 different than the og luffy, this self insert fanfiction have its own fans but it's simply not for me.

Yo. Great story. Haven't read for a while, but after letting it stack up, Im back.Keep up the good work. And if u have time, continue your Obito story as well.