Reviews of One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

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very interesting and enjoyable read still embracing the Luffy character while also making it his own version one criticism is the chapters are a bit short but the writer makes up with that by releasing 2 a day I really recommend people read this is a very good read

since this is ‘Real Life’ difficulty, will his crew also change? we cannot sure that he'll sail and meet other characters precisely similar with original based level selected. Also, will he form a gang that will become member in Goa Kingdom (like Grey Terminal's kid, original character)? also normally, someone won't using small boat like Luffy did especially guy who cannot swim.

This is good but the author is a greedy guy that only wants power stones so the chapters are incredibly short and even with 80 of them we are just at along park

Just for the fact that you gave "Whitebeard" an actual White Beard, five stars. Bravo...

This is a good fic but there are parts amthat I don’t like about it. I get it’s an AU but something’s just ain’t it. I don’t really want to type all my reasons so I’l just say the writing quality was good and the updates are amazing along with the world backround, however the mc is mid and the development is meh.

The story is good, there are some issues with the personalities, but other than that it's a great one piece story. things to look forward to: the first 31 chapters are all about luffy's training and how he learns the skills of the navy and the use of weapons

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The grammar is on point, and there are rarely mistakes, and even then, nothing major. The only thing I can't stand is the slow pace. I am at chapter 26 and the MC hasn't even started his journey but is still training on Dawn island. Boring af

I love this fan-fic....Please solve this Monkey D. Mario naming problem of the Marines.Also Please let Luffy learn Hassoken,King Punch,Red Hawk,Conqueror Coating,Emission and Internal Destruction,Diable Jambe (Red Hawk Kick Version),Also recruit Yamato and Carrot (maybe Ulti) in the crew along with the original crew....please don't recruit Buggy,Gin (debatable),Collect a lot of different dials from Skypia like Impact,Tone,,Reject,Axe,Flame,Ball,Breath,Eisen,Milky,Flash,Heat,Flavor,Jet,Lamp,Vision,Thunder,Control,Mad,Water etc. Dials and make upgraded Thousand Sunny.Also let a lot of characters like Bell-mere,Titi,Olivia,Hiriluk,Tom,Otohime,Rosinante,Lami (Law's sister),Sora,Toki etc. be alive in future.Also let luffy collect Pure Gold and also let a lot of movie part be in It....I really love the fic...keep up the good work and release more chapters much faster.

the only negative things of this fanfic are the pacing and the chapter lenght.

Tiene harem ???????? Deberías aumentar los capítulos más largos muy cortos ojalá no la dejas abandonada etc la mayoría de la historia de one piece la dejan abandonada etc entonces si aumentan más la escritura a los capítulos

Hey author, can you I make a request? Make a one piece story, with Sinbad's powers on seeing the flow of destiny/fate idk.As well as his personality? lol

there is harem? I don't Carey if there is, but is more enjoyable for me at least so there is or there is not a harem? or at least some love interest for te MC

Story is freaking amazing, like always. Love your work dude. Now make sure to give Luffy some challenges, he's kinda OP. He needs at least some challenge to grow stronger.

I Never read a one piece fanfic better than this one, this one is really awesome, i dono think i could read a better one even if i search for one for a year

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What can I say? The story, the character and the way the plot in general seems to be moving is great, phenomenal stuff can't wait to see more