One Piece Starting with Uchiha Itachi's Template

If you are a One Piece Fan better skip this Fanfic. Otherwise it's OK i guess. The Author only has superficial knowledge of the One Piece world. Many of his "facts" are simply wrong, many others are debatable. The System is not too bad, By the time the MC battles the first Admiral he only got like 4 missions. All of them not too bad. The Author completely forgot about the second reward (Character Template like Minato, Saitama, ...). On one hand thats disappointing, on the other hand he gets too strong with those. Like the MC does not need to fear anybody as soon as he can fuse Itachi & Minato. His Character is a mix of an idiot and a chinese "young master". Not likeable at all

I like a lot actully but, just that you are making itachi much more powerful than he is originally, not that i'm saying that it is a bad thing. This story is actually decent and is making sense, just can you make your mc, ya' know, less idiotic? i mean does he really need that much chackra just to defeat weak opponents? but I'm not saying that it's a bad thing oks i'm just suggesting😁 hope you don't mind it. Anyway it's still a good story, like it💜💜💜💜💜💜

it personaly gives me to many chines young master vibes and the way they talk is just really bad and makes me want to puke the idea and concept of the story is good but the rest is ehhh

Welp author severely made itachi powers more crazy then they were let alone this all the characters even the MC are dumb basically they act like Xianxia characters. Apparently the author doesn’t take criticism to well either or just outright ignores so this fic is at the bottom rung of this site

aside from updating stability everything else is bad, the mc is a big idiot, he captures a pirate ship and killed mostly everyone aside from nami and some useful pirate and the hostages the pirate captured, and what did he do he goes and and speak his plan in front of the hostages and then put them on the navy ship so those hostages can call the navy headquarters and snitch the mc's plan to go to conomi island to the navy, great thinking mc its like he sold himself and even helped them count the money

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dawg really let fodders in his ship and not Robin? like what??

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Me and everyone who s not braindead can't stand such foolishness. Read (author) naruto and one piece (released ones to this date) at least five time over and over agai, maybe then u could understand a little bit. Itachi, which never was for close combat starts doing so (its template, not itachis eyes with just his powers). And even then, it's more efficient to finish all with weakest genjutsu and i dont even mention using tsukiyomi on some weakling captain. So not very big expectations and I rather stop on 15th chapter. And of course this chinese arrogance of always commenting mcs actions by some nearby nonames or readers

Inconsistent power scaling, bounty of mc is very odd. MC just got transported to ONE PIECE and first thing he chooses to do is violence... No training required, stronk from the start. Lot of wuxia terms "save face", "I will remember this humiliation", "you dare".

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