this is the best one piece fanfic i have ever read in over a hundred chapters there are very few grammatical errors plus the chapters are super long with 2000 or 3000 words not only is the best one piece fan fict but also one of the best fanfict on this site so i will give a five star review
a really good fanfic and not op at all at the very least the mc has to work hard for anything.i think this is the best one piece ff out there long chapters as well. the plot is very good and pretty much no plotholes and the mc does not have any power he does not use. he is not op his power does not exceed the one piece world as of chapter 123
It's one of the best fanfic's I've read out there, author executes the scenes well enough that a reader can envision it in one sitting, he is a master at Dao of Cliffhangers, there are no grammatical mistakes and the characters are fleshed out and not forgotten. It used to be 1 chapter a day before HIATUS and the timeline written by Author is well researched and written. Definitely Recommend. (Note: This review was written at the time of HIATUS)
I'm disappointed that this is my first fanfic because i got best in first, And now when I'm seeing other fanfic out there they pale in comparison to this.. Sir author please do not drop this Your humble fan
Aside from the updating stability this story is great! Super recommended!!
Bastante prometedora la novela, me gusta que empiece en la era de Rocks y que tenga sus buenos detalles 😉 ya que hay muy pocos fanfic que abarquen desde aquella época dejando de lado a los sombreros de paja, tiene un excelente desarrollo de las peleas y un buen ritmo del progreso de la historia 👌🏻 y las personalidades de los personajes se sienten natural, junto con un sistema que no se siente invasivo ni muy dependiente de él, "lo recomiendo bastante"
This is definitely one of the best One Piece fanfic I've ever read. The plot, romance, logic and flow are good. So I don't have much to criticize as the pace is good, and the grammar is without many mistakes. The fighting scenes are very very detailed, which personally I don't like much as many times 1 all chapter can go on just a simple fighting scene, but they're good so🤷 Many times there are world building chapters and they are quite boring to read. (I just skip past them and move on to the next chapter). Some chapters are about the secondary characters, those in my opinion also quite boring so I skip them as well to get to the chapters about the MC. Each chapter is always more than 2,000 words, most times 2,500 words and sometimes 3,000+ words! So even though there are only 100 chapters so far, there is still a lot to read. Though as the author like to point out constantly, this is not a wish fulfillment fanfic, so the MC doesn't get stronger too fast. To sum it up, this is definitely a 5 star fanfic!
I don't have much to say, but I love the world-building, the hype, and the adventures. Since I mostly read harem, it's not a problem for me. The characters aren't bland either: the author has clearly spent a lot of time developing them. I would say it's a perfect story for me. However, all perfect things come to an end, and I've read all the latest chapters. Sigh, I guess it's time to focus on my own life now.
Read quite the few open piece fan fics out there but this one is the among the better ones out there the character and his development is kinda crazy sometimes but it's manageable and world building itself is very intriguing.
one of the best one piece fanfics. character development: 5/5 story engagement: 5/5 what else do we need ?
Best fanfic ever read Every plot is in harmony and no issues with grammar. Quite a interesting story to boot too....
A very overrated fanfic, I can't see what makes people like it if the author shows the same thing as everyone else when it comes to making a One Piece fic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
is this rewrite??...............................................................................................................................................................................................
I know I'm kinda late into the party, but here's my review for the rewrite... Characters; 5/5 Although I didn't notice it at the original work, the depths of the character of the rewrite are more evident to not be noticed... Pace; 5/5 Although the pace of the story can be quite fast, it is not to the point that it feels rushed... Originality; 5/5 I like the fact that the timeline remained the same as the original work and the small bit of changes that the rewrite has from it... Power Scaling; 5/5 Personally, I liked how OP Damien had been from the original work rather than now, but unlike the original, the rewrite actually makes a lot more sense when it comes to powering him up and I think that's better than before... System; 5/5 I like how you change the system from like his being source of power to his guide or list of them cuz I'm tired of those systems by now... Update Stability; --/5 As of right now, the rewrite has 36 chapters, and although I remember you releasing chapters on a regular basis, I can't be sure yet if that changed as well or not, so yeah no rating for now... Anyways, that's it for my review... the wait is totally worth it, and I hope you achieve the goal that you want with this work. Good luck, and don't give up, Author-san.
My favorite one piece story on here so glad it’s back.
great novel I am not giving full 5stars because I don't know how it got updatedI read it after it got completed
The story itself is awesome. The story is not like any other story and is really great. I have already read it 3 times because it's not the same like the other fanfic. The only problem is there is no update but the author should focus more on his study and inform us readers in the discord chat when he will start again
i did not like the stars .... .... .... ...
A mind broken terrorist who had killed his enemy including all innocent people and himself as revenge by bombing a wedding hall. He then was favored to be reborn in One Piece world with a system. ergh Suicider + Terrorist = Chance to be reborn with such opportunity. what a bad character to be an MC. bye2
It was a very interesting book to read 😊