One Piece: As Portgas D. Ace

Too soon to say anything, seems good so far, but my advice is to add proper tags so its easier for other readers to find this story. Its a One piece story but doesn't have the One piece tag.Also hope the live interest is Yamato and its not harem, too many idiots think just because they existed there was love in there but it was mostly so that they and their family could survive because at that time, food was luxury, political marriages are mostly for benefits etc.And also it stops being about the story and starts being about girls which is never a good sign.Sorry for the long rant, have a nice day

5 stars only for the plot itself. definitely a prime read. will also give another review after reading

I doubt this will even surive to the point of getting to real 20k words. If author cannot write 20k to build himself up. It will probably end in 20-30k anyway with 'rewrite' or simply drop. I might return here to update this or I might be just right. That's mystery of life.

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Great read, It has potential.I am absolutely going to subscribe to your patreon, for this gem alone, hope you will update often.

Looks interesting, but a good premise are dime a dozen here, but not everyone could commit. Dropped at 10 chapters. Anyway here's a 1 star for Webnovel putting an abandoned fic on featured page, with less than 30k words to boot.

Great story, hope you won't drop it :)))

It's very good I just hope the author can finish it since I have seen many authors make very good fanfics only to say they don't wanna continue it and make an inferior fanfic.

I see potential, I hope it continues to be good ..........................................................................................................

good read. The character intro is also very good. hope you update more for us. make the chapters long, and increase the word limit. good work author hope you continue this work

Hey there, I believe in the potential of this novel, that said, please don't limit yourself from expanding the world. One piece could be a much bigger universe than just what is out there in the manga and the movies. Since the author made a character canonically able to create artificial fruits, who is to say that the power system can't be expanded even further? Anyways, good luck!

I do not know who you are nor have I read your previous books. But this is a gem and I hope you won't drop this. Since there are only 2 official chapters there is not much to review. But the introduction alone has piqued my interest. My only nitpick is the essence of archmage. It is completely broken after all. But I'll see what you have planned out. Hope for the best. Good work Author 👍

perfect writing, some flaws due to the speed of the events that happened, I hope you will take your time now that the rescue is over. .............

MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE

Just reading the synopsis this book deserves 5 stars 🔥🔥

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just giving a well deserve 5 stars...no spoilers just read it if you like. I just hope there are more chapters. I will just take a look on the other one piece story of author, haven't seen it yet.

Five stars because I love both of your one piece series

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This is one of the best starts to a fanfic that I’ve read in awhile. Very well done