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One Piece; A Marine Story!

The story talks about Raoul, a young man the same age as Luffy, and the events begin with his arrival at the headquarters of the new Marineford, aspiring to pass the promotion exam to become Vice Admiral. This event was the beginning of his story, full of confrontations with pirates. But could events develop into something greater? More Chapters; patreon.com/Ayaka0

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A Surprising Outcome

Chapter four: A Surprising Outcome

The courtyard was silent, the tension thick as Raoul and Coby faced each other in the aftermath of their intense battle. Raoul stood tall, his chest heaving with exertion, while Coby sat on the ground, sweat dripping down his face. The two had given it their all, but in the end, Raoul had emerged victorious.

The officers, lined up at the edge of the courtyard, murmured among themselves, their expressions a mix of surprise and approval. Vice Admiral Smoker nodded appreciatively, his eyes reflecting a rare hint of satisfaction. The recruits who had witnessed the fight were abuzz with whispered comments, impressed by the skill and determination shown by both combatants.

Admiral Kizaru, watching from his elevated position, gave a slow, lazy clap. "Well, well, that wasn't boring at all," he remarked with a bemused smile, his eyes twinkling with amusement. His comment, light and seemingly offhand, held weight. It was a rare acknowledgment from one of the highest-ranking officers in the Marines.

Raoul walked over to Coby and extended a hand. "That was a great fight," he said, his voice sincere and respectful. "You pushed me to my limits."

Coby looked up, a faint smile crossing his lips as he accepted Raoul's hand and stood. "Thanks," he replied, wiping the sweat from his brow. "You were incredible out there. It's clear you've got what it takes."

For a moment, they stood in shared silence, the weight of their ambitions hanging in the air. Then Coby spoke again, his tone contemplative. "What drives you, Raoul? Why do you want to rise through the ranks?"

Raoul considered the question, his eyes narrowing slightly. "I want to make a real difference," he said slowly. "I think that every person has his own way of applying justice. I want to see if there is a difference that my justice can make. And you?"

Coby's eyes hardened with determination. "I want to create a world where everyone can pursue their dreams without fear. Where justice isn't just a word, but a reality."

Their conversation ended as the remaining recruits were called to assemble. The ten victorious fighters, including Raoul, stood in a line, awaiting the final decision. Vice Admiral Smoker and the other officers conferred quietly, their deliberations almost complete.

"We have two positions to fill," Smoker announced, his voice carrying over the crowd. "The first candidate we have chosen is Raoul."

Raoul felt a surge of triumph as he stepped forward. None of the recruits had the ability to object or complain about this, because Raoul earned all respect through his strength and skill.

"And the second candidate..." Smoker began, but was interrupted as Admiral Kizaru stepped forward, his expression as inscrutable as ever.

"I believe," Kizaru drawled, his eyes scanning the line of recruits, "that boy, Coby, should be our second choice."

The courtyard fell silent, then erupted in surprised whispers. Coby's eyes widened in shock, his hand gripping the fabric of his uniform. Raoul, too, was taken aback but quickly composed himself, nodding in acknowledgment of the unexpected choice.

Kizaru turned his back, beginning to walk towards his ship, his entourage of soldiers following closely. As he moved away, disgruntled voices rose from the defeated recruits, their complaints echoing through the courtyard. "It's not fair!" "We won our fights too!" "Why Coby?"

Coby's face flushed with anxiety, but before he could react, Raoul walked to him and placed a reassuring hand on his shoulder. "I'm the one who fought you, so I have the right to say that you deserve this, Coby. You fought with heart and skill. Don't let anyone make you doubt that."

Smoker, hearing the commotion, turned back towards the crowd, his face a mask of stern authority. "Silence!" he barked, his voice cutting through the noise. The recruits immediately fell quiet, their complaints stifled.

"You all fought well," Smoker continued, his tone severe. "But the decisions are final. This isn't just about winning a fight. It's about potential, about what you can bring to the Marines in the long term. If you weren't chosen today, it means you have more to learn, more to prove. There will be another opportunity next year. Use this time to train harder, become stronger, and show us why you deserve to be here."

His words hung in the air, a mixture of challenge and encouragement. The recruits, though disappointed, nodded in understanding. They had come far, but their journey was not over.

As the assembly dispersed, Raoul and Coby stood side by side, united by their shared experience and newfound respect for one another. They were ready to face the challenges ahead, determined to rise to the expectations placed upon them and to fulfill their own lofty ambitions.

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