it's like a budget version of the novel Devils Cage, ,............................... . . . .........,......,,,,,............,................
Gotta say, other than some grammar errors, this is a really good story, just binge read the first 2 volumes in about 4.5 hours Really enjoying the world builing, character developement and class descriptions
one of the best novel i've read so far. the only thing is that the novel update is slow. the story development is clear, the world background is clear too.
I had high hopes for this story, but... Chapters are waaay too short. Too many nonsensical rants sometimes lasting up to 2 chapters. An annoying AI. Confusing almost cultivation novel like babbling about his affinity training. At about Ch 60 the Author changes stats by /10...cause reasons. It was about there i dropped. Started out well and then somehow just got derailed.
I love the story the protagonist is involved in the world and is not really dumb or overly heroic or easily falling for and doing everything for women kbecause their women and he should’ the world gets a basic explanation at the start which gets more developed as the book goes on. Have not finished it yet but this is definitely e of my favourites!
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I have read up to volume two so what I review about will just be regarding those chapters. The story kept me engaged and reading into the night . the story progresses at a reasonable rate and still has room for more development.
lacks emotion, interaction, conversations are bland characters dousnt feel like human read till 150 so [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Wow, the novel really is a game changer. I mean you read so many novels to the point where it's just reading,... no pleasure. But this novels really does give you that dose of pleasure that you've been missing out on. Great work Asura.
The story should only be read with your brain off, also do not expect any depth to the MC and the side-cast is non-existent. Basically it really feels 2D which is sad cuz it does have potential, at least a little bit, if onlz Author gave more depth to the world he created. If this got rewritten with more side characters it would be 3.5~3.8, currently it is slightly less than 3.
If i could go higher then five stars i would the Story t he plot the progression and pacing are s tier stuff i dont have much to say but Novela like these are what should be on the number one ranking[img=update][img=recommend]
I am on 66 and here it is what i thought. Its good.. Better than many novels on this site... Authors also did a good job but here are some problems. 1.Story seems more like summary. 2.Less of interactions with people or anyone. If i summarize all his interactions with other characters it will fit in 2~4 chapters so basically 64~62 chapter this guy talking to himself 3. Its hard to visualize... I was unable to visualize the village or the jungle... 4. No action... Every time you shows the result but no fighting scene. 5. Some Chapters are too short with fillers (I personally don't like 😂😂😂) Anyways Author good job but it can always be better...
I really, really enjoyed this one... it’s a shame it’s pay to read, and the chapters are pretty short, but it is very well thought out and executed. Highly suggest this one.
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I really like this story. At first I thought I was gonna get something similar to The Devils Cage, but nah, this it great in its own right. I really look forward to the further growth of this.
Absolutely love this read i await every day to see if there is another chaper release. Cannot fault it, progression is at a steady pace and doest throw too much on you straight away to put you off. Would recommend.
There is a detailed background, wonderful story and little light is cute. I enjoy this novel greatly, so much so that it is one of my favorites.
I really like your work on this book as it is very good 👍 quality and very well presented. The Character of this story has already been through a lot and will still have to go through a lot more, but he has a strong 💪 will to persist. His nicest trait is that he doesn't just do dumb things but thinks about his every move 🤔. What i like the most is that it is not your average transmigration story where they are all more or less the same in their development. So go on an continue. If you haven't already read it then what are you even doing here go on and read it .🤗🤗🤗🤗😺😺😺😺👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Loving how you slowly reveal the information to the reader while creating mysteries that need to be solved. Characters development is awe inspiring and has me excited for whats to come. Love his guilty pleasure 😂
I really like this story. The plot is new and unique, not to mention interesting. There are some mistakes (with the writing) here and there but nothing too bad. A shame that this book is quite underrated, maybe because it is special 🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♂️