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The writing is odd and doesn't flow well, the pacing is also too slow. Plenty of typos and pretty sure I read somewhere "reeked" instead of "wrecked" and such. It's alright for a first draft while outlining the story, but needs to be rewritten almost entirely before it's ready for readers. The characters' behaviour is really unrealistic and over the top. Anna being a dimwit and being unable to stand up for herself despite being a lawyer is plain stupid, and the exes' behaviour isn't realistic either. While I understand they need to be portrayed as abusive, the scenes are just too over the top. Actual rich people care about their reputation above all else, and are very rarely found demanding discounts and painting themselves as beggars. The dialogue is just really weird, almost as if it's written by a young teenager. The story has potential, and I do look forward to seeing what this author might grow into. Beta readers and editors would help a lot.

i absolutely love this book. i have gotten so addicted because the storyline is something so close to what happens in the real world. it also gives the reader a sense of what type of people there are in the world, some good and some bad.

What a great story. I just couldn’t stop reading. There is so much happening in this book. Great characters kept the story interesting. Epilogue was not up to par with the story and seemed rushed.

Here again with another review. So just by the proyress I have made, this novel is truely wonderful! While reading it you'll get angry and happy and all those emotions a lot. A lot of things are repeated and a lot are revealed. But you should trust the author and the process. I highly reccomend new comers to read this novel as it truely is amazing. Thank you author for you time, your hard work and effort put into this novel. Despite some hate towards the novel, you still did a marvelous job writing it!

The plot itself grab my attention.Something different,something unique.Nice job author,☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

I am saving all my coins just for this! This would be my 1st read for 2020. Looks really promising and entertaining. Great job, author! Can't wait.

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Wawo ,,,,I would say the story is indeed better than I expect ...........sooo good ....I would love to recomend it to the novel lovers .......

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I love this novel great plot, characters are descried well.details detail legal and cultural differences is what makes this story as well as the romance, and even compassion I. This story. I simply just love reading I just hate not having spirit stones when I need them...

Enjoying the novel thanks to the author for your tireless work and especially the stories of tough female lead which gives shiver to the readers

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The story i is very interesting so far . The story line is good,the characters are well developed Though I find Anna's treatment towards her a bit over the top and annoying,even if she can perform her wifely duty yet,she should at allow him a little bit of closeness

Whatever!!! I'm still having fun reading...Whatever!!! I'm still having fun reading...Whatever!!! I'm still having fun reading...Whatever!!! I'm still having fun reading...Whatever!!! I'm still having fun reading...Thank you author

Day 1 starts from Chapter 1 and ends in Chapter 53. Day 2 ends in Chapter 67, Day 3 in Chapter 85 and so on and so forth. As you can see from above, the story pacing is awkwardly terrible. Indeed a lot of important details but it info dumps on the most irrelevant matters. Dozens of chapters can be summarized everything in a few sentences. The dialogues are overly long, unnecessary and try to cover too much leading to mundaneness. The characters? Sigh... Too cliche 8f the story development could get a lower grade than one star, I would have given it!

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I read all the reviews for the book. The story seems to be interesting. I would read the book first and come back to review again. Till then

Everything was fine till ML and FL went to buy wedding rings after that part story writing and character building suck. No offense but i would like to suggest to creator that instead of writing plots about childishness of villa u should write a better one How could ML and FL be so comfortable with each other just in 48 hrs, even though you have shown FL getting angry because of sudden intimacy the angry shows more of childish behavior instead of firm stand. FL is getting angry at thing that she shouldn't have instead of she should have at other times. I am just saying all this because i like the plot until they bought wedding rings Writing was different as you were giving details of day and a single day had 40 chapters about it But i got disappointed after reading further because i was looking forward to what will happen next Anyway it can't be helped know Just do better job in your next novel, all the best

I appreciate writer to put efforts in writing as it takes a lot but I don't really enjoy reading this. No spark between d leads no chemistry I can't feel for them.really lengthy 🙁🙁🙁