Dark Knight
ITS A NOVEL WITH MAIN POINT AS COMEDY (till ch 80 at least) SO DON'T EXPECT ANYTHING SERIOUS so writing quality is good and easy to read and understand SO 4✳️ story development .... well their is no story uptill now just a comedy skid and too much info(don't know if it's necessary for comedy or not).....it was fun at the beginning but now at chapter 80 it's just annoying....it's same gig again and again and again for 80 chapters continually SO 1✳️ character design....a naive character who take things at face value every single time...so only good for comedy...but now it's too repeated and side character are all also their for comedy so their is no seriousness in the story not even a bit it's exhausting to read without any character development and change of pace SO 3✳️ update stability is quite good 2-3 chap/day...SO 5✳️ not much of world background... shown.... aside from it's outer sell (kingdom names,a few sect names ECT) but without storyline it doesn't really have base for emersion so it seemed like unimportant information (which it is not but their is nothing much to relate it with) SO 3✳️ HOPE IT HELPS THE AUTHOR IN SOME WAY AND MAY IT HELPS READERS TO SEE IF THIS NOVEL FITS THEIR NEED
To start things off, i do not like the MC in this story whatsoever, in fact the parts where it's him alone are the most boring parts of the novel for me. With that said, i absolutely love the story, because all of the senior brothers and sisters, elders and sect master are gold, such good characters, so many funny and interesting moments, their story keeps me reading the novel and without them i would NOT reading this past 50 chapters. Highly recommend the story for those who don't have to idolize the MC in order to enjoy something good.
I read this in mntl till 260 chapters I was disappointed, really it started out great but it gradually turned into a cluster fuk, Ye Ping didn't even look like the MC as Su Shangyu became the focus I didn't know why the author did that.... when I thought the MC is unique then suddenly it started to turn out he wasn't I lost it, the author freaking lost his mind, this didn't supposed to have multiple protagonists but the author decided to do one around 200 chapters and it turned shit, I read his notes and he really was confused and some messaged of how a disappointment it was so he stated it would turn for the best on the bust volume but shit it didn't, don't read this if you don't want to be disappointed...... if you're wondering about the 5 stars, it's so to prevent this being deleted......
The story itself is great! The only issue I had with it is that the story focus too much on the MC when in fact the story has multiple MCs. Due to how the author wrote the novel the novel centers around 3 people, it's unfortunate that the author doesn't exactly sees this and instead focus on only one of the MCs. It wouldn't be an issue if it was just that, but because he forces this understanding it messes with the tone of the story, and as such its only 4 star. 😊