Rapture_Tales
It's a rather enjoyable story but has one issue overall the story will progress forward but will always take a step and a half back to explain details that would be unknown otherwise. Usually this will occur right before some moment during a fight. And should there be multiple characters fighting it can be expected to happen multiple times. Beyond the reoccurring flashbacks each chapter has significant amount of content. So even with only a few chapters released a week it will hold up with those other novels that have daily chapters with the minimum amount.
my lungs! read chapter 208. I died laughing. hands down the best chapter yet. development of the story is amazing. don't expect a solo MC focus though. this story shows the growth of the team led by Seeker Carlean. unlike another typical story, we only see the MC being a badass. in this case, its more realistic as the center does not revolve around the MC. Cliff is <3
It's the best book I've read so far. Wish they could make an anime or series about this. :) ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Here from royalroad gonna re-iterate what I said there The pacing takes a nosedive from around chapter thirty onwards, one character becomes gay and I don't understand why I need to know character's sexuality then one becomes lesbian I guess, I don't know I skimmed from part one epilogue onwards but at this point I think the author is JK Rowling, I think the author had severely overworked himself and forgot how he was supposed to get from one plot point to another, Please And I Mean PLEASE Take Some Time To Go Back And Re-Write The Story, I don't care if you're going to publish or not but start rewriting because it's turned me off from the story so much I can't read it anymore, I like this story the concept is immaculate but the execution takes a nosedive please read your reviews otherwise this is how you become like another creator I know who refused to re-write until his story was finished.
Overall this is a great story! I enjoy the many different characters and the world building that goes on in this novel. My favorite character is Cliff haha and I have really enjoyed his character progression throughout the story and am always excited whenever he has some screentime (please have more chapters for Cliff to satisfy my craving lol) This was the first story that i have been invested in on this platform and will continue to support the journey!