GhostyXXX
This story is basically ' unordinary ' with sex.ual content. instead of powers he uses system. But eyes still glow when they use power.. And also there is royals in school who decides rules. main character is coincidentally jon (john) hehe he can also copy other powers? Hmmm. Maybe the only difference is se.xual content.... But I love this story more than Unordinary because I am a fan of R-18.
As an hentai novel it is fantastic, there isn't any restray on the MC lust. The MC is like fallen man that after being betrayed decide to destroy and change the entire world and system. His skills are too cheating and the story has a lot of hole, but the hentai part keep evrything intersting. The best thing is that a lot of the characters of the story come from a lot of anime and you see couples in those anime being broken, moreover thanks to this you can immagine the aspect of the character better. The real problem is that of these nearly 100 chapters at least 20 are him sponsoring himself on patreon or asking powerstone. I would at max prefer him making the chapters here locked.
I don't mind the names and concepts from other novels because there is an original plot and all but the main issue which makes this novel almost unreadable is the constant plot holes in the story. like saying a skill does one thing and has limits to the mc having basically no limits and going back on everything he says or figures out about his system. the powers get ****ed up and change almost every chapter. it's so painful because I would love if the novel just stayed to one thing or another. he could be super op or have an actual growth system IDC it's just annoying when the limits to his power fluctuates depending on how the author wants to develop the plot but there is no explanation to why he gets stronger or his powers have no limits anymore and the points he has go up or down randomly without any reason to be explained. it's just to frustrating and confusing to keep up.
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