Chapter 1: Uzumaki Koshiro (Rewritten)

It has been 9 years since i was transmigrated into this world, at first i thought it was a dream and couldn't accept it right away but now i have fully accepted the fact that i've become Kushina twin brother.

In this world they called me Uzumaki Koshiro and I'm older than Kushina by 15 minutes, maybe because of Kushina genetic beauty. I've become very good looking and they called me the cutest boy in Uzushiogakure, if Sasuke was popular in academy i received same treatment as sasuke from girls.

In the past, I don't have any siblings and because of that, i spoiled Kushina with siblings love, i could say I'm more like a father than her brother, mentally I'm 30 years older than her. Our relationship is very good, Kushina also likes me because I will always be there when ever she needs someone by her side (for example after fighting with some kids she will go to me).

She respects me as a twin older brother, when we are alone she says she feel like I'm older than her by many years, none of her friends is matured like me and that's why she will always listen to my advice, but in reality, i rarely give her advice usually i will become her listener.

Tomorrow, Konoha will bring the envoy to bring Kushina and become next Jinchuriki. Even though we are twin but kushina body are more suitable to become the host of kyuubi, that's why she was selected to come to Konoha.

Because i know a future event, i begged my mom i wanted to come to Konoha, I can't let Kushina alone live there, she must be lonely and afraid if she is the only one who come to Konoha and left her hometown alone. I begged her and said i will come to konoha and return to Uzushiogakure after become genin.

To be honest, i'm afraid because in the past i only know how to fight others by using fist but this world has chakra so they fight using ninjutsu so I don't know if i will excel and become a strong ninja. But as a fighter, i will try my best to learn everything as i could and become stronger so i could protect my loves one.

For me who has live 30 years in the past, it become easier to learn about Fuinjutsu, Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu and Taijutsu. In the past 9 years, many people have been beaten by me. Usually, I will ask older Ninjas for sparring and they really regret it because I will beat them using Muay Thai, Taekwondo, Silat and many more. As an athlete of Mixed Martial Arts, i have learned a lot about self-defence.

Maybe because I was a transmigrator born in Uzumaki body i can use 5 Chakra Nature (water, earth, lightning, fire, wind). Not just that, i have huge chakra reserve and i have tried to recreate every ninjutsu that i've watched in the past such as Chidori, Firestyle Majestic Destroyer Flame and Rasengan.

Training those ninjutsu with Uzumaki body is really an advantage, I use shadow clone like Naruto did and BOOOM everything become so much faster. Combining my 156 IQ and genius in battle I have become a very strong ninja in just 10 years. But i still feel there is something that i missing, usually transmigrator will get a system but after all this years i didnt receive any system.

"Haa, i hope i have a system", i sighed and suddenly i heard notification.

CONGRATULATION HOST, BECAUSE OF YOUR STRONG EMOTION YOU HAVE ACTIVATED A SYSTEM. 

I AM A WISH SYSTEM, IF YOU HAVE WATCH ALADDIN MOVIE YOU MIGHT BE FAMILIAR WITH GENIE. 

SO TODAY I CAN GIVE YOU 3 THINGS .

Since i come into this world this is what I'm waiting for, earthlander without a system is suck. You might become cannon fodder and die. But I wanted to test something so i asked the system

"For my first wish, can i return into my past world?"

NO YOU CANNOT RETURN TO YOUR PAST WORLD, YOU HAVE BEEN SELECTED AS A SPECIMEN THAT MIGHT OR COULD CHANGE NINJA WORLD. OUR PROGRAMMER WANTED TO SEE HOW FAR YOU CAN GO.

"Aaaa, investor so i have been kidnapped by someone and forcefully entered Naruto World", he remember back to anime Sword Art Online where consciousness enters a fantasy world (computer) using a specific device.

UZUMAKI KOSHIRO, DO YOU WANT WANTED TO CONTINUE GETTING YOUR WISH FULLFILLED OR CANCEL THE SYSTEM?

I'm speechless, it looks like the system knows how to threaten me, "Of course, i want, for the first wish I wanted to have All Haki and if I'm not mistaken if I asked for a character template I can have all his ability isnt it?"

CORRECT, YOU CAN GET ALL HAKI, ABILITY AND SWORD THAT GOL D ROGER USE. PLEASE CONFIRM IF YOU WANT GOL D ROGER TEMPLATE?

"Of course, i choose Gol D Roger template"

YOUR WISH HAS BEEN GRANTED, YOUR TEMPLATE CURRENTLY IS 30% YOU HAVE ACTIVATED OBSERVATION HAKI AND ARMAMENT HAKI BEGINNER. PLEASE INCREASE YOUR TEMPLATE TO 100% IN ORDER TO AWAKEN CONQUEROR HAKI COATING. 

UNCLAIMED: 12 SUPREME GRADE SWORDS 'ACE'.

(My personal opinion: To be honest haki is more stronger than chakra, Mihawk might beat Hashirama using sword imbued by Haki, with simple slash he can destroy the wood with ease)

"Damn, I get Pirate King Supreme Grade Swords. I can beat Hashirama using this sword".

WHAT IS YOUR SECOND WISH?

"I wanted system space, but not normal space.  This space can trap kyuubi and use their full power  to maximum. Let's say if kurama enter this space i can use Kurama Chakra Mode like naruto and minato use", said Koshiro with a smile. 

OK I CAN GIVE YOU A SPACE

"Wait a minute, i wanted this space can be shared with Kushina. She can use this space to trap Kurama and use his power, i also can use Kurama power", Koshiro suddenly remember something. "Please, make it the space bigger 300,000km2 and i can divide the space, shape the surrounding and put livestock or farming in the space". 

"I want a space like Chinese novel, space that can store many thing, can farming example have features like game qq farming, have spring water to heal, detoxify and even dispell jutsu, most importantly with this space i can open spatial rift like dr strangers."

BECAUSE THE REQUIREMENT OF THIS SPACE IS TOO HIGH, WE NEED TO INCREASE THE ABILITY OF THIS SPACE TO THE MAXIMUM. WITH THIS SPACE, YOU CAN SEAL THE KYUUBI INSIDE AND USE THEIR CHAKRA, EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE NOT JINCHURIKI AS LONG AS THEY ARE INSIDE THE SPACE YOU CAN USE THEIR CHAKRA AND BECOME STRONG LIKE A JINCHURIKI. YOU CAN USE KURAMA CHAKRA MODE EVENTHOUGH KYUUBI WERE SEALED INSIDE KUSHINA.  AS LONG AS YOU SEAL SPACE INSIDE KUSHINA FIRST.

IF YOU STEAL KYUUBI FROM JINCHURIKI INSIDE THIS SPACE, THE PREVIOUS JINCHURIKI WON'T DIE BECAUSE SPACE WILL AUTOMATICALLY HEAL THEIR VITALITY. THERE IS NO HUMAN CAN STEAL KYUUBI THAT RESIDE INSIDE THE SPACE, EVEN THOUGH THEY HAVE MANGEKYOU SHARINGAN OR RINNEGAN.

EVEN IF YOU OPEN SPATIAL RIFT, OBITO CANNOT ENTER YOUR SPACE USING KAMUI WITHOUT PERMISSION AND THEY CAN'T FORCE YOU TO OPEN THE SPACE USING GENJUTSU, YOU CAN OPEN THE SPACE ONLY IF YOU ARE 100% CONSCIOUS, YOU CAN UPGRADE SPACE BY BRINGING SOME RARE PLANT AND ANIMAL

'Damn, this space is too overpower, Chinese like to write about space or interspatial ring. Thanks to that i can ask similar ability' thought Koshiro

HOST, WHAT IS YOUR THIRD WISH?

Finally, it come to this point. "System please grant me mastery fuinjutsu so that i can seal black zetsu or even any member of otsutsuki clan".

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