Reviews of Naruto: Time control

It's a decently thought out story well written besides some spelling errors with name, but otherwise good job but please try to keep names correct and consistence.

The story was pretty good...But the mc remind you at each chapter that he is the most charming guy in the world, that all the girls fall for him, etc etc. But in the end at 30 years old he is still a virgin...He collect loli, give them hope, but don't do anything to them when they grow. And then like that he decide to leave the naruto world, because why not, it's not like he has a brother, a nephew, and some girls that love him and that live with him (not that he will ever touch them)

novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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Aww.. So interesting but so hard to read :<

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The grammar in this novel is simply put very bad. The charakter development is in the negative. If you want to read a novel with extremly bad grammar and zero charakter development then enjoy.

Good novel wonderful plot direction 🔥 But need a good translator 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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