Navy_King
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Highlight of this fanfic is Mc's cheat, The Template System. (Hope author doesn't give too many character templates for Mc. 1 Character Template is Excellent. 3 Character Templates is very good. Anything more than 3 is bad) Plot premise, plot progression & Mc's characterization are just good. Character interactions are above average (Some are clichéd, some are cringy & very few are good) Hope author completes this fanfic. Hope more fanfics with this type of template system can be seen in future.
Really good story with great ideas. Unfortunately the main character suffers from missing braincells and young master syndrome. There are over 6 different situations within the current 30 chapters alone where he makes possibly the dumbest choice possible and then immediately afterwords goes oh no. Not only is the main character stupid but his plot armor is so strong that the whole world is made stupid. A situation that is very clearly a possible driving point and could be used to teach the MC to not be stupid? Oh no the third hokage and danzo are delusional for four years through 4 different obvious incidents. I would recommend reading this but you will lose braincells so be aware of that.
POURQUOI Simuler ca mort et meme si c pour ton histoire au moins trouve une logique derriere leur mort frere sarutobi na jamais quitter le village alors c debile et c pareil pour danzo il reste toujour au village dans l'ombre franchement gros si inutile et ca se voit pour n'importe quel ninja de konoha que danzo et surotobi ne devrait pas etre la sur un champs de bataille le general et jamais sur la premier ligne
I donât Really know what to say about this novel. For me it has too many Chinese Vibes, words like âsneered, disdain, giving face, senior, bratâ etc just ruined it for me.At least there was no â currting deathâ. The Uchihas are portrayed like a typical Young master Clan and the Hokage like a scheming and stupid villain. I know that the Author read too many Chinese novels and his very being is already corrupted, thatâs why I know it will take some time to write a story without the typical Wuxiâs stuff. I just hope someday the Autor will rewrite some chapters. If I made some mistakes please correct me, English is not my first language. I want to learn through my mistakes. I hope I was not too harsh with my review, itâs still a great fan fic but currently just not for me.
This is the first time I am writing a review, but the work is done well, there is nothing to say and add, while there are only a few chapters here, and it is not clear whether it needs to be changed and corrected, criticized and so on or not, but if everything goes the same, then the story will really turn out to be the best that I have read! Thank you for your work, author-sama! Using translator for this!
It's good at the start like Chapter 1-20 after that chapters MC slowly becomes dumb. And too many cringe plots and force plot. I really like this ff at the start but I'm disappointed. So I'll change the ratings. Before I give 4.8 now I can only give you 2.6 and I hope you don't become like other chinese author, bcuz your story development are really like the chinese story.