Rysangel
i really enjoy 9 chap of this fan-fic , 99.99% naruto fan-fic bashing sakura for no reason infact sakura is one of the most potential character in naruto world . imagine born in civilian household , no special bloodline inheritance , wasting 10 years in chasing a boy , serious training only 4 year almost on the level of sannin without any plot armor ( charingan,byakugan,uzumaki/senjuconstitute,tailbeast ) just pure hardwork and suitable guidance push her self to pinnacle hokage . all in all most of fanfic even original work just waste sakura potential so hard that i really pity her.
Honestly. Story was good until the 91st chapter. Then the Author just decided to eat Taco Bell and diarrhea all over the story. He absolutely destroyed it with forced Plot. Making the MC get dumber and dumber and after keeping the MC out of Romantic relationships. Just forces him into one with someone like 8 years younger than him. A minor after he refused to get with someone 10 years older because of the age difference. Honestly. Don't waste your time with the read. The story goes nowhere and gets impossible to read.
Nice beginning . The story sounds promising and I hope to read more chapter . Great story ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป Great story ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป Great story ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
Quick facts bro : Substitution jutsu doesn't work like that it's a jutsu used to harass the opponent by moving faster than the foe, find a log Or whatever object they find near and replace their position with it obviously you have to faster than the opponent to pull it off ur saying a bunch of genin were able to overpower a jonin and kage level opponent in terms of speed and pull of substitution jutsu ๐ฅฒ๐ฅฒ
There are many Naruto fan-fics but this is unique and can successfully become one of your favorites. Author has done his job wonderfully. Pros:- 1)The conversation between characters is smooth. 2)Low grammatical errors. 3) I don't know why people make Sakura annoying, okay no need to point your gun on me,I will agree she is annoying but not so much as other fan-fic portrays. If normal Sakura is 5/10 on a scale in annoying, other will show her 100/10 . So here you will get Confident and reliable Sakura. 4) Mc is calm and knows how to get things done, like how previously he got Sakura from Kakashi's team lol ๐. 5)Characters are fleshed out well. Cons:- 1)Few Chapters(you better release more or else...๐ช) 2) Like other mc's he is a little afraid of changing timeline, not much bit still it's shown which is understandable but I have no other cons ๐คท
I liked the story in the beginning till he decides to fight Orochimaru to save Hokage or when he tells his students about how to pass the exam. Sakura simping on his is too cringe. Naruto saved her countless times still she chose Sasuke. I doubt that he is in any way cooler than Kakashi. And the idea is disturbing in itself. Anyway, I don't like the character and how forced it looks. Had a lot of potential to be a top Naruto fic, but it got wasted.
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