This story was going good until MC suddenly turned Insane with time, he became a manipulative bastard that sees everyone not related to hinata as tools.
Great story
this book was amazing, thanks for creating something so special for us to read . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . l . . . . . . . . . . . .
Great book! Excellent Message: Family first, not multiverse travel! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Probably the best Naruto fan-fic I've read so far, though there's alot of timeskips nearing the end it's actually better than the other Naruto fan-fics I've read. Though, the grammar quality could be better so fix that author lol
Good...................................... Job.......................................... Buddy................ .......................keep it up.................................................................................................
Harusnya cukup baik, sampai MC terlihat Jahat pada bab 10, itu sangat merusak karakter NARUTO, sangat mengecewakan,.........................!! π₯π₯π₯π₯
Aku harus mengatakan, karakter benar benar BURUK,. Awalnya sangat baik sampai Karakter terlihat kejam dan merusak plot asli dengan menunjukan sifat jahatnya,. π₯
honestly this was a great read. the final fight could have been longer but in comparison to the whole story its negligible . you did a great job with this book
this is a really fun read, i enjoyed it very much and is highly recommended ... the MC is very determined and motivated to achieve his dreams , with a little dark personality but later found love and lived happily ever after.. oh almost forgot this has a lot of deaths twists and turns. lol π€£ππ
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Proper incorrectly the nuts and I will get back with you on now and father and son are going to go in the morning to get the kids and then we will be there π πππ
i would have given it a Higher rating if the author didn't add romance moments like every 3 fking chapters ." oh i am about to fight with my life on the line but i promised hinata to come back in 10 minutes" like wtf man I liked you didn't add more girls in the mix but wtf you made such a bad@ss mc into a simp why
uma novel bwΓ© fix. Curti muito, exceto a parte em que o edo tensei foi usado no Minato e depois abandonado. Enfim ,foi brutal. .............
very lighthearted fic good fic, definitely not something for you if youre looking for something serious some of the info youll just have to take with a grain of salt, instead of being force fed training montages.
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I loved the novel.... The is clever and ruthless.... I hate Japanese novels with those pussy-ass MC's who let enemies go and are too thankful for everything... I also hate those Chinese novels that have MC's with such ego and arrogance, that even when they are weak they act like the king of the world... Loved this novel with such short and Good buildup for the story...loved the character of the MC(a lot to Ruthless)...but it's good.... Thanks to the Author for such an amazing story..... Keep up the good work..... Write more novels if possible.... cause I loved the way of your writing....other anime worlds adventure would be appreciated.....Kudos....ππ
Pretty good story with a big universe. The hero is a smart Naruto but a little dark inside! The story go further than the canon with OCs enemy and has a true ending! Good job for this story author-sama, you can be proud of you!! βΊοΈπ
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