Naruto: The Shinobi Genius

Dialogues are too forced and story flow doesn't seem seemless. I'm out!!

It is generic to the point that it becomes boring. In essence, the protagonist replacing our favourite Uzumaki is statedly a master manipulator and schemer of sorts. Unfortunately, in every dialogue he is the very picture of your average 12 year old otaku. Reading it gives me second-hand embarrassment. On the other hand, the moments where he's under the pretext of manipulating people, it's so blatantly and painfully obvious, that all the believability and immersion is gone. It hits all predictable tropes in such a manner that by reading a few chapters you'll already have a rough outline on everything that'll happen from that point on, namely most "issues" and plot points he'll want to change being discribed as following: "Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Naruto. You should/shouldn't do, think or be this way. I'm a genius and smart, so you should follow my advice." "Oh okay, you are now my best friend.". This story loves to pretend that its characters aren't humans with complex desires and intricate personalities, but NPC's with preprogrammed responses. In the end, I think it lacks passion. I've realised I'm ranting now. It's most likely because I'm tired of reading these stories where the protagonist is supposed to be a genius, but thinks and talks like. an. idiot! 2,8 out of 5 and that's only because it is on WebNovel.com.

On chapter 5 , I dropped it . Not really , in 3 years he trained his body to genin ? The author does not understand the campaign . it would be better if he Guy overpowered his soul in Naruto . Naruto if you train properly and do more than yesterday , he would already be a jonin . yes, I'm sorry for the fans, this is a fan fiction mugu to say one thing, he's probably been doing push-ups 10 times for 3 years, he was probably afraid to dislocate his arm

The character strength developments are everywhere he explains sometimes others he just forgets (tbh I think the author forgot the character has a system multiple times throughout), his mental state is everywhere and no where at the same time, doesn’t follow original writing theme he set up( slowly op and darker personality) instead he made him op rather immediately and barely follows the personality scheme, if your looking for a mindless read this is one however if your looking for something original or at least a bit different than the other hundred cliche fanfic then this isn’t for you.

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love the book.it made me cry in the end because it had a very good ending and how the character developed and grown. it like the heroes journey 😭😭

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author do not get distracted by some bad comments You are writing a very good story , I love it , i have been finding a fic like this for a long time and now i found it Really good fic Thank u for writing it

It was good. The last few chapters were all over the place. The story development was good as long it was just changing the cannon stuff. I also like the mc. But total original developments in story or characters weren't that great. Overall, it was an enjoyable read.

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Okayish. Pros : Has a good training curve. MC starts to train properly since young age and uses all advantages he could gain from transmigration. Power is accumulated in a steady manner Cons : Everyone apart from MC is pretty dumb and easily manipulatable. Nothing what you'd expect from Ninjas.

Неплохо, система почти не чувствуется, никаких магазинов, квестов и прочего дерьма. Разве что стал сильным слишком быстро, но по-другому никак не получится, так как он родился слишком поздно для обычного развития.

Bunch of p*ssies on the reviews, the MC is not that bad, they complaint about the MC killing some Konoha chuunin and bark about killing innocent people, like... Wtf dude, they're ninjas, they pretty much have their own killing record, none of them are "innocent". Also they're judging MC character without haven't readied more than 10 chapters... Yeah, they want the MC personality to fully develop in 10 chapters, bunch of ignorant p*ssies.

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i have only one word to say ... PERFECT, the kind of mc i like is ruthless for his ennemy and care for his family :) :............. .... ....

tldr, it's worth your time. all i can say, this is One of the best naruto ff. there are some typos here and there, but the writing quality is still good, 4/5*, easy to read and won't kill your braincells.

Unnecessary evil and dark. The mc is a psychopath with no positive feelings whatsoever he doesn’t have any kind of relationship with nobody. He is impossible to relate to.

People have motives and reason for their actions. this naruto only wants power for the sake of power an he is unnecessarily evil and dark.