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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
this book is good, not that bad, but knowing this will be dropped a few days later on saddens me, i mean that's what the author does to his other books but i wish he'll finish this book, that would be quite an achievement for him since i have seen that his books doesn't have any completed in one of them, you guys should check out his other books, but i doubt you'll like it since they're dropped, or maybe he just got mindblocked idk, still i wish for this book to be completed, that's all thanks
First of all, this is my personal viewpoint of this fanfic and is not a downright hate review. The story started of good and was quite fun to read at first, however the quality has dropped significantly ever since the Chunin exam arc (that has been stretched for way to long). One strength of this was that there were new ideas that had been utilised (A different Kekai Genkai instead of the usual Sharingan and 'sage body') instead of the oversaturated cliches that are common in Naruto fanfics. The Mc who despite his flaws was tolerable to read now acts like an aloof idiot at every moment. Whereas the conversations feel awkward to read and sometimes are just downright weird. In conclusion this started of good but fell in quality. I'll be back in 6 months and give my final review then.
This book was originally a one piece fanfiction but its now made the transition into a Naruto one so the current reviews for the most part are not accurate. This fanficition if completed (currently on chapter 18) will easily be one of the top 5 best naruto fanfictions on Webnovel, I have extremely high hopes and I hope the author fulfils it :))
Thank you author for the excellent novel! 1- World scenery (5 stars) 2- Strength of the protagonist (5 stars), he gradually grows as he continues his journey, this part is very important in naruto fanfic. Why? I can't read something like a 12 year old protagonist with the strength of a Kage.... Shiruzen has 50 years to reach his peak... so imagining protagonists reaching that even with kage bushin loses interest. 3- Author's Writing (5 stars) 4- Protagonist mentality (5 stars) not arrogant, knows where to train and ask for help. Smart, but knows he still has a lot to grow. 5 - Updates of the novel (5 stars) today there were at least 2 chapters. Even 1 a day is very good! Have a good day! Author- san
very good, very good writing, very good story, very good /fast/stable updates. PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
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