Reviews of Naruto System Within Naruto

mc is bipolar, a pedophile and author forces everything. the mc grooms children into being his wife when they grow up and the civilians cheer him on for some abstract reason sometimes he cares for people an does stupid things to save people he doesn't even know others he's a plain creep???

Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter...... hahahahahahahahahahahahaha

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The Author is sick in his mind. It would have been much better if he had made lemon.....🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅

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A BASTARD WHO LIKE TO RATE OTHER NOVELS WITH SUCH RIDICULOUS REASONS. FIRST CHECK YOURSELF, YOU ARE WRITING A FANFIC YOU USELESS PIECE OF SHIT!! - YOUR MOTHER SHOULD HAVE JUST SWALLOWED YOU.

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This is good keep it up great use of different elements in this story I think this story has the best gammer of some I’ve read thanks for your hard work

nice. another novel ... can you mass release? i love your novel's . keep up the great work .... NOW EAT MY POWER STONES GO GO GO GO GO GO GO GO GO GO GO

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so gooooooooodddddddddd more plsssssssssssssssssssssss also wifu wise I like akio sunadai don't know how to spell that and I really like ino and if you can make that water dood have a sister with the same kekkae gankai the one that's literally made of water that would be great cus he looks cool but if he had a sister she would look smoking hot lol if you also think that would be a good wifu comment here cus the author may see it and agree who knows i really like the idea lol keep up the great work author bro lol

It 's not like that ! The system is good, I like when the hero is strong . But everything is completely wrong here , the power level is not correct ! And his purpose ? I understand he wants a harem there , but excuse me , what is he doing with the children ? and what thoughts?! If he likes them , just help them train and flirt when you are at least 15 years old . But here he really calls Lolita children ? is this a joke?! I would ban such fan fiction, it 's really not right !

I started reading it now, that's why the rating is low, I will change it during the course of the work, but I warn you, the MC's parents are two uzumakis called PEDRO (FATHER) SERENA (MOTHER), read at your own risk. Obs: English is not my native language, so spelling mistakes are overlooked.

i read like 60-70 chapters thats almost quarter of the novel , and i have to say its pretty much full of nonsense , we have a MC who can do things like helping his parents to inc. their blood now thats cool but whats not cool is , he has to do this fancy red lines stunt to show his parents that he can do these kind of things just after being born , you might think this is awesome but if i say if we use little sense here , thats creepy ok like hella creepy because if your new born child can do weird red line stunts after being born you will either rush to church or some spiritual cult and say my child is possessed by evil spirits , if you are chinese than your parents might think you are genius born to rule the world ! china glory and brag about it to everyone on street. next is he is 6yr old , seduced someone twice the age , gave everyone bloodboost , manuals , talks to his parents about how his dad made his mom scream at night and whatnot , thats 6 yr old bro even sasuke sakura drama happened when they were older than this , and literally no one is questioning these things , where is that crazy danzo , hypocrit hokage ? the story is good no doubt but it is without any sense , full of loopholes and ofcourse MC brainwashing childs to be his lovers .... and mind you he is high on adrel. rush so when he is surrounded by ppl he still buys bloodline and whatever and merges with them cozzzzzz he cant wait to go home and do this he HAS to do it right now even if he gets exposed in short , MC is mediocre with not much EQ IQ but he is mf transverser with system so you know how that goes

Now this was a good book until Chapter 68 (if you not include writing problems) then after that it became too absurd for me of course it could be good for someone else but not my cup of tea so I dropped but you can give it a try if you like the change in plot made by author (it was forced to the core in my opinion ) which I don’t like

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