Naruto: Nara Shadow

Hello this is my first fanfic that i'm writing, i'm looking forward to reading your comments.

I write everything freestyle, so I don't have a script, so if you have any suggestions then write them in the comments and I don't use translation programs or autocorrect either, so please write down any errors and I'll correct them as best I can, I want to improve my English with it.

I will rewrite the Story in the next days, because i changed the writing Style, so that it's better to understand who speaks at the Moment.