I read through the latest chapter, 16. I highly enjoyed it. I hope the author will continue with this. What I like most are the characters. They're unique, and the author has a good sense of imagination. I like the idea of an air bender/monk and string fruit powers from One Piece. It strangely fits with the Sand village. The author does a great job of writing the setting and character development. I'd say the biggest issue for this novel would be the writing itself. There is a tendency to repeat certain expressions and words. It's not too noticeable, but it's still in every chapter. It makes the overall text awkward to read. Expanding vocabulary could help. I'll give this a 4.4/5.
It's a pretty good fanfic , i liked it a lot . I gave u 2 power stone and wrote this here as i thought suggestions might be read . My suggestion is to have mc being a character who controls pace of fight like one those guys in animes who you have to fight on their pace and have impressive record but get's broken by male lead , the point being with his thread release , clones and puppets i think such style would be ideal . Using chakra and puppets to out stamina opponents .