Indie131998
Iam not a very brilliant english scholar but according to me the small grammer mistakes can be ignored in web novel.Now lets come to main point ..the plot, i must accept the author had done a great deal of good job in researching and story development it completely excites me while reading this book . The people who are big fan of naruto will totally enjoy it especially when he teases sasuke & For those who love sasuke will also be not that much disappointed as the author has taken great care to make his character also interesting. Lastly , the book for naruto fans like me is a blast .....I hope to see fast updates from now on 👐👐👐✌
From a guy who read over 100 novels. This is a very good fan-fic of Naruto that I have come across. Others are sometimes cringy and forced which I seriously abhor to the soul. Only problem is the updates which nothing can be really done. So all I can say is I will patiently wait for the completion of this novel. I don't really have anything to criticize about since it has too little mistakes I would generally pick on. Anyway I don't usually give a review but I thought I would since this was a absolutely amazing read. Anyway, regards to the author and stay save everyone.
STILL DIDN'T READ THE FIRST CHAPTER BUT I CAN TELL YOU THAT IM VERY... VERY.. VERY GLAD THAT THERE'S NO HAREM I CAN TELL THAT'S IT'S GOOD <3 . . .............................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing was kinda okay in the beginning. It was good. That's it. But ever since the "Kazekage Retrieval Arc" began, I began seeing thus story in a different light. VERY good stuff, friend. This creativity of yours is much better written than anything else. That personal flavour is all that was needed in this story. Now it's a complete and innovative one. And I love it. 💜
Pretty good I have to say almost keeping the charter as true to themselves as possible there are a few parts that are kinda of strange but understandable, the story is jumbled around and some scenes seem forced just to have it in there because it was in the original and sometimes it feels like the author should of changed it up a bit more however I can understand he wants to stay close to the source material. coming up with 100% original content can be a challenge. but those are minor problems by only real issue with this book is the lack of details when it matters the author is doing a good job with the story but there are moments when he should delve more into the characters thoughts and how there hearts are changing for instants my biggest target of that would be saskue there are moments where I want to know what hes thinking as naruto is explaining things we already know I want to know his thought process and a lot of the time the author will skip over it or give a vary vague statement or too. he dosent seem to know what sasuke would be thinking and he scared of messing up his original character.