ImagineMaker
It's a good story with a fast development, but not to the point of not understanding anything, the evolution of the character in is realistic for those who have reincarnated and know the plot, the MC is smart but not to the point of being boring and omniscient, there is a lack little emotion from the MC, but the story is going well it looks like it will be a quick story with almost all points closed, I like the MC to be suspicious of the village and see that the Uchiha are not the villains, being honest I consider the 2 Hokage and 3 Hokage the real villains of the massacre against the Uchiha
One of the better Naruto fanfiction's I have read in recent memory, the author is very aware of what is canon to the Universe including some obscure details that other authors either ignore or are unaware about. The quality of the writting is very good when compared to other stories, very few mistakes or errors. I just binge read this so concerining update situation I am pretty unaware, the only thing I can go off on is the chapters section and seeing the timing between chapters, which seems to fall between two to four days which is incredibly stable when compared to some other fics. Story Development is smooth, it doesn't feel too fast nor too slow and has a decent balance between personal character scenes and plot/action driven scenes. The characte Design is pretty flushed out, without going into spoilers the MC actually feels like a person instead of some sort of template self insert who rarely makes mistakes, he plans and execute his plans with only minor issues popping up everynow and then but nothing unreasonable. As said at the start the author as a very good understanding of the Naruto world and you can see that in how the story is written.
Wonderful novel! A fresh take on the naruto fanfic path, he is reborn as sasuke’s twin and becomes OP through semi logical means and achieves kage level quite easily But even then, it is very interesting as this AU has some new ideas like an evil Hiruzen! This seems like a harem which makes sense given what the MC’s situation is (reviving dead clan)
Boy oh boy your fan fic is one of the best and this fan fic although mc is op like quite op af but the storyline and plot is very good it’s like comedy but with a serious thought for the story. Anyone should read thisbif you like fan fic, the mizuki one is also great as the first fan fic i ever read that explain talk nonjutsu as ninshu ahhahaha 🤣 Author you did a fantastic job, believe me just don’t rush the storyline because yknow your fan fic is the best!!
A fanfic where the protagonist plans to be more than just a pawn. It's interesting to see Hiruzen as a villain and not a kind old man; also the construction of the other characters is very nice to read. If there is something negative, it is that the author writes 3 fanfic at the same time. I would suggest that a single fanfic be your priority to upload the chapters, the remaining 2 fanfics continue to accumulate chapters and then publish them.