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only problem i see is that its in need of heavy editing. normally I won't write views but this is a piece of work. and a good one at that. just some mistakes and things that can be said better. keep up the almost okay work. and try finding a editor as it will help you out a ton.
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Why is this so bad? Seriously, the translation is garbage. The novel is also garbage.
Bro where are the new chapters?? Was it "kamui"ed or something?? Also laughter fairy? seriously? laughter fairy?? bruh now I have to write 140 character just because I have to tell this minor detail!!
The story isn't horrible, it can be fun at times but the translation is pretty bad, if you read a lot of bad translations it might not matter but if you are new to bad chinese translations maybe stay away from this
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this is a good story.... I love it Anyway take your time to continue this story 😉 I am waiting for the next chapter.... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Very awesome novel. But need some grammar correcting and names of the characters are sometimes weird. Overall the novel is very good, keep up the good work!!
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Ok here is thing 1st story is good 2nd just like anime there are many fillers. I mean he literally writes a chapter about Hinata vs neji, gara vs lee. I mean if people want to see that they will go watch anime why would they read it.
Хорошая работа, можно отвлечься читая её, продуманный сюжет и харизматичный герой + часто выходят новые главы, плюшки от системы хоть и выглядят дисбалансно, но гг нужно разрабатывать их, а не просто получать все сливки, хоть с чакрой я думаю он уже монстр
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