Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

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this was a very good read thanks for sharing your work for free imma write exclamation marks now cuz that's all I gotta say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It’s an okay story overall but I don’t really like the MC that much I get it the authors trying to show him as some unhinged and broken person trying to be analytical and trying to convince himself things by having him talk to himself but in the later part the entire thing becomes like 60% just monologue and exposition, and that would be okay if it wasn’t so redundant and so often. It’s like ‘I WILL BE IMMORTAL’ or ‘I WILL BE A GOD’ or something like that or something long drawn out drivel defending his actions by basically saying he is a sociopath so he doesn’t care. His process of thought and justifications have already been shown they don’t need to be expressed in every odd chapter.

I love this story so much can't wait for more chapters good job keep going like this Is it possible that you can upload one of your stories Harry Potter: Reborn as Lockhart here with same uploading phase as this one

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Good story but i would like for yami to let his guard down in the future and fall in love with tsunade[img=update]

How can you make the mc a clan leder at 8 you really don't know how the naruto world works , and mostly it's shows in you description of the inzuka clan, the bar is so low for decent fanfics here but you mange to go lower. How than hard is it to do a little research before you started this "masterpiece" or you are as lazy as your writing.

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Well this is NOT the tipical MC got reincarnated on Naruto universe, MC doesn't have a harem(not that I've minded), he isn't a goodie goodie that helps everyone, and thank God he isn't a Naruto babysitter.... He's the bad guy(well not exactly) but he got what he wants for any means, he smart, strong (he didn't start with a cheat or anything like), and deliciously ruthless This a good story if you are looking for something different and if you don't mind some minor grammar errors a really good read😁

Good but I don’t like it. A lot of his plans always seems to go wrong and I know that plans can’t always go perfectly but it’s dissatisfying to me how close he gets towards death due to his mistakes. Example: MC has brain fart and decides to get arrogant and fight the 3rd raikage head on even when he tells himself not to get arrogant earlier in the story. He reflects on this after but he still makes the mistake. Anyways, it’s good but I’m not into ‘close to death’ stories.

I really love this MC, he is a sociopath, I hope to see more brutal scenes. and completely break the clichés of generic novels!!!!<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

This is by far my favourite naruto fanfic. To be honest the only reason why I can't say I like it more than the original is because of nostalgia. The MC isn't the tipycal "socyopath" who mindlessly kills people. He does things mercilessly and he doesn't hesitate to kill for his goals. He didn't get overpowered by relying on his talent (because he isn't particualrly talented) but with schemes and extreme amount of work. The grammar is pretty good, the story is sometimes fast paced, sometimes a bit slower, but there is always a balance. Just read it and you shall see.

Really nice fanfic, I like de fast pace of it, plus I’m a huge fan of evil Main characters, so yeah, can’t wait to see Yami get his hands in some doujutsu

Very good keep up the good work…..................................................... xxx.

I recommend this story to you, if you’re okay with the mc being self centered and willing to sacrifice anyone for his survival, and if you’re desperate, like me, for a good naruto fan-fic that’s not gonna get dropped and doesn’t have a basic unrealistic selfless hero that gets all the ladies.

I would highly advise this book to be read. The MC is a great character, a mix between a sociopath and a psychopath, which is something I like very much. The MC makes mostly sound and good decisions so no dumb MC, and he is truly ruthless not that coldMC sh*t where in fact the MC is a big softy, not this is truly ruthless. The OC's that the author created also authentic and possible. The flow of the story is great and every chapter makes sense, the way the conclusion is reached, how a problem starts, etc. is believable. All in all, I enjoy the story and highly recommend it to be read, it's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics out there (At least in my opinion).

Writing quality is good and the grammar was decent. The plot worked out as well but what really made this disappointing is the attitude of the MC. He is like teflon; nothing sticks. No meaningful relationships, just pure indifference or some negative emotions which led to no character development and made the experience of reading this kinda dull.

This is written for kids that newly reached puberty and started jerking off. Cringe, Crass and wannabe is all I can say about this fic. Definitely the worst novel on any platform.

Mc is ruthless to his own poor mother. Dropped..................................................................................................

The book is about a robot in the Naruto World. It is about a person who cares only for himself, to an excessive point. He would rather let people die, then take the ‘risk’ of telling them to move. This is in the middle of a war in the face of an inconsequential move that he can block with a percentage of his chakra. He would rather lose 5-10 allies then 15% of his chakra. And this was simply one example. He cares about himself to the point that he makes bad decisions. In some situation he makes a smart call, but in others he makes major mistakes. This isn’t usually an issue, but he doesn’t learn or grow from his mistakes. According to the Author, as he already lived one life he doesn’t need to grow as a person.