Reveal spoiler
hope you update more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Rly like it so far. nothing to say rly other than the changes made in canon and they are good. Keep it up and thx :******
Anyone else think the MC should Get 3rd hokage's monkey summon And learn sage mode from them to end up looking like supersayin 4 kinda?.........
writing quality (4 star) : good enough to read and at least unnoticeable grammar error for me story development (4 star) : good, the author not following the canon but not engaging enough to read. character design (2 stars) : mc basically is the doormat of Konoha and other character is good for me but not the mc updating stability (4 stars) : daily update world background (5 stars) : good, Idk what to say. in overall in good for me just keep writing and you can do it
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Update more plzzz✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
I like how it tells you how the saiyan bloodline was weaked for the world of naruto what most people seem to forget about Dbz is that goku was the weakest saiyan baby born (not sure if It's ever or just at the time) so average saiyan baby where stronger and with not much training they should be able to destroy a planet kinda wired how all saiyan never trained
Reveal spoiler
Haha me encantan estos chicos, el MC es divertido, se esfuerza y sobretodo, aprovecha su ventaja de ser un niño para disfrutar de "Los placeres de la Vida"
Good
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review... Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless reviews... Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality... I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews... Yet these hands will never tap anything... So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
GoodddddddddddhoodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddGoodddddddddddhoodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddGoodddddddddddhoodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddGoodddddddddddhooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd