Reviews of Naruto: Aokiji Yuki

So the guy is approaching thirty years of mental age but finds it normal to kill 9-year-old children to supposedly preserve his village? It's a good story, but the mc's personality and actions don't match his mental age and modern mentality.

You can make one with Akainu in the rock village or east of kizaru in the lightning village, or one with kaido in a village other than konoha

Promising story here by the author. My only complaint is that the low frequency of updates😆. Hopefully, this novel will be as good as your other one.

so good keep going 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😎🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 I can't wait for the new chapter to come 🥴😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

with the potential to be on par with the lightman in MHA. So far so good. This is definitely a good read compared to emotionless or uselessly arrogant mc in this app. You should definitely read this.

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This is pretty good so far! Keep it up! This is pretty good so far! Keep it up!This is pretty good so far! Keep it up!This is pretty good so far! Keep it up!

i will look forward to this story mr. author since its your second story and based on your first story you have great ideas and writing. The first story have mistakes that hurt my brain but its your first story so its fine to have mistakes. i hope that you manage properly the mc's power level in this one so you wont resort to nerfing the mc's brain to follow your plot. pls continue writing naruto: template system because i really want to know the ending of it. im sorry for my harsh comments😅

I've read the last one, and so far you've improved from the last one. I'm stoked. it is quite surprising that the update stability is so good, I shall read on.

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This is a very promising Naruto fan-fic, and I hope the author continue to write it. I like how it flows so far so I'm cheeringthe author on. Fighting 💪💪💪

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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

Very good story, with good narrative and way of coupling the timeline of the series LOLOLOOLOLLLOLOOLOLOOLOLOLOOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLLOLOLLOLOLOLOL

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the last chapter made me write an review after a very long time ...... 72 chapter was that good .........................................................................................................................................................

What is your current working Patreon? This "navyking6666" one isn't working.................................................................

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great story, well written mix two amazing universes of One piece and Naruto with mastery. Looking forward to more chapters it sure deserves a chance