Reviews of Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Reili
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... truth to be told - i searched for NECROmancer and didnt realized it was NANOmancer until several chapters later. i reached the chapter with the specific "weakness" and cant stop anymore reading. (ok - i needed several minutes to calm down my laughing^^) i love the mean and sassy character of the little missy. truly my kind of mc. story is interesting and i hope it developes further. (kind of yuri would be sooooo fun ^^ but i will read nevertheless) go go go author-san! (stamp of approval)
This is most definitely a feel good story, and it is up there in quality compared to some other works on this site. Unfortunately this does not mean that it's great, since there is a lot of **** stories here. The main problem I see is that the author most likely practices a discovery writing and makes stuff up on the way. For example the MC gets skills or useful items that are later forgotten and not used when needed. There's a skill system in the world. What purpose does it serve is unknown, because MC can just go around and make whatever 'cool stuff' with ice she imagines even though it is not her skill, and apparently the stuff she does is for some reason more effective than skills (exploding/splitting/transforming/remotely controlled ice spears/balls/walls/ramps or whatever else). There's a lot of things that are suddenly introduced even though it might have been important earlier (time dilation in dungeons for example). Minor spoiler ahead: What got me to completely drop the story was the MC killing some random bloke after a second auction just because he happened to have bought an item that she needed. He was not fighting or threatening her. He was just running for his life, being pursued by two thieves. There goes all the talk about her moral integrity and not slaughtering ppl for power I guess.
After reading 181 chapters and enjoying the story over the course of a couple days I felt like I owed it to the author to leave a review. My review will be slightly harsh, as I really do enjoy the story and I feel the author has talent and room to improve. World building This is where I felt the story was sadly lacking. Most LitRPGs or stories in general have some overarching theme. Take a look at novels like Overgeared, Solo Leveling, Legendary Moonlight Sculptor, Everyone Else is a Returnee. RPG elements are an integral part of these stories and have been incorporated in a way that makes them absolutely essential. Dungeons become a place to train awakened humans to defeat whatever opposition humanity faces. Nanomancer Reborn has no overarching theme and meanders endlessly, quite often I feel like I'm reading someone play a MMORPG never veering away from the endless dungeon grind. As I keep reading I continue to have so many questions. Why are there dungeons in this story? What planet is the main character even on? Is it earth? What opposition does the planet face? Why is there no main antagonist? If the MC used to be a tier 6 human then what about the other tiers? What are the main goals of the MC? Sadly 181 chapters in and there is no "plot" besides the MC grinding dungeons with her friends. The only things I know about this world is that there's a place called New York and that there's dungeons. But the story never answers why there are dungeons, or how they came to be, or even if this planet is Earth, as some of the geographical locations are different. Characters I really enjoy the characters in this novel. Shiro is quite the lovable protagonist, and a certified badass to the core. It's quite fun to read the character interactions with her friends and her escapades, however, no characters are without fault and there are quite a few things I would like to point out. One of the things that stood out to me in the first few chapters in this novel is how eager Shiro was to form a team, seeing as she was betrayed by her former teammates and killed. I understand there is a difference between grooming someone from youth and picking up random teammates, but I do find it odd how Shiro never shows any form of suspicion or PTSD from betrayal. The development of many characters are severely lacking, namely Lyrica and Madison. In recent chapters I've seen many commentators become increasingly annoyed at how Shiro seems to hand everything to Lyrica, someone already with a golden spoon, calling her a "leech" and such. Honestly, I'd have to agree with their sentiments, as I do find it strange that two random strays that Shiro picked up develop both hidden classes and hidden proficiency rising to the level of Shiro with ease. I think a great way to appease both the commentators and develop the characters a bit would be to shift the POV to the side characters and show them struggling in a dungeon and getting some decent loot drops rather than having Shiro hand them everything they need.
I'm giving an honest review here, knowing that it will be buried by robotic five star simps. But hopefully I can save anyone with similar tastes the frustration of what goes down in the mid 400's for chapter count. Author has many 'yuri light' moments and teases a ton of MC internalization that was pretty decent. However, in the end, a very anoying plastic male lead takes over... and it's just not readable anymore. I'm not pushing one way or the other, could have been a plastic female character that made me shut it down. Anyhow, I got 500 some chapters in and it's being removed from my list now.
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Be careful!! This book is a new form of drug, only recently discovered by the labs of the Health & Drugs Administration!! It's well written story is of very high quality compared to anything currently on the market, and a element nicknamed "Badass MC" was identified as an extremely potent addictive component. Moreover, it's creator is the evil genius Reili, known as one of the finest authors by the Intelligence Department. Hence specialists estimate that it's secrets still haven't been revealed, and ensure that the previous comment fail to describe the potency of the drug. Further studies have shown that very few subjects react negatively, and the vast majority of people are irreversibly compelled to read the remaining of the novel past 10 chapters of exposure. Proceed to your own risks!
Concept is interesting. I come from author's first book The Anime System (Highly recommend) the way the author makes his story is nice and listens to his fans. There is not much for me to say but I high expect a good book. Cause the first one was AMAZING! Either way can't wait to read this new book, please don't drop it.
I thought the novel was incredible, and I was always curious to read the next chapter. Even the author made a serious mistake, in my opinion. As much as it has a main female character, the novel is MAINLY Male leading. Lyrica was introduced since the beginning of the series, there was always evidence of romance with her, but it was always postponed. After a long time, Nan tian appears chasing MC, being a perfect prototype for women (the most beautiful thing in the world, he never had an interest in women, he even hides his face so as not to let his enemies (women) see how beautiful he is) . So far so good, because she had other signs of men falling in love with MC, and since she is a beautiful woman, is perfectly normal. This until the Watchman appears, and cause a "trauma". After that the author practically started to force Nan tian down his throat, pushing Lyrica away, and making the romance between nantian and the MC totally forced, with continuous needs to stay close, cute jokes and with double (and mostly disgusting) jokes happening all over moment ... Honestly there are a lot of episodes that I started to just skip 80% of it just because of the forced bar, and Shiro's extremely shy and forced and shy new personality. I mean, I can forgive the author if more than 50% of the people who read are women. But I am sure that more than 80% are men. Are you really putting together a "perfect" male character for a romance made mainly for men? I would understand if Nan Tian had appeared in the place of lyrica at the beginning of the story, until then the bond of both would be justifiable. But seriously, Lyrica was thrown aside ?? I find it really disappointing for a novel that I really liked to have gone so badly. Because of how it started I think it is unfair to give only 3 stars, but after the watchman I also think it is unfair to give 4 stars or more.
hm novel starts off good . mc gets betrayed by her party . mc then reincarnates into snow gril which is really cool . then mc escapes dungeon and gets minor help from some girl . So to repay her mc will spend millions and help her to reach like level 20 from lvl 10. oh you may think why is she so optimistic after being betrayed by her own party ? noone knows even author doesnt imo . Author tries hard to "show" side character has life , literally explaining the fight scene of a side character for 2 chapters in every battle . . now imagine spending spirit coins for reading battle of a fkin side character. read till 66 , where pretty much mc babysits, shows how fkin over level & awesome she is in tender age of 13 . And the whole a*s thing was cringey af . . So in short if you like those top 10 novel in power ranking aside from lord of mysteries then its perfect for you.
