Angry Laugh
Honestly the author should feel embarrassed to charge for a novel that has so many grammatical errors.. please go fix the inconsistent gender and naming errors. Besides that the story is a good one but I refuse to pay when half the time you’re confused on the gender of characters. The names change throughout the novel as well.
Story is pretty good overall until you get to the paid chapters and then it feels like author gave up. Translation is different. Characters attitudes and dialog become cardboard. Author needs to work on flushing out the world (we know almost nothing about the world after 50 chapters), and better flushing out the characters so they aren’t so one dimensional. The concept and originality are good.
MC is always manipulated and is a extremely idiotic person with a extremely bad personality. Translation for free chapters are excellent. After the free chapter, it went downhill. It is still readable but not as consistent as the free chapters. For example, his first summon is called "yellow" then became "ah Huang" or it was called"yellow scarf soldier to "yellow bandana". it will rattle your reading immersion a little bit.
Good plot, but chalk full of spelling/translation issues (male/female pronouns swapped, characters having multiple names, several inverted grammatical sections, etc.) but so long as you pay attention, it's easy to follow what they mean. Good story with some nice power scaling, but it seems like the power scaling get out of control eventually.
Went through the first 40 chapters of the trial read and the book isn't that bad. For the most part the writing is about average. There are some consistency issues with ranks and numbers. Other than that, there isn't much about the world that this takes place in. I would continue to read it as long as this isn't another of those books they went to charge double to unlock chapters.