First and foremost, let's start off by saying there's many novel things about this...novel. It is a pirate story—something I have never come across in my many days of scrolling through Webnovel. On top of that, it's clear that the author is experienced in storytelling, and that is not only visible from the impeccable grammar and prose, but also from the way the story itself is weaved. Rarely do I ever come across a writer with such abundant(and visible) knowledge in the craft, and hence, consequently met one too many inexperienced writers on the platform. This is a breath of fresh air I did not expect when clicking to read a novel with such a small reader base. I hope the author keeps up the regular chapter releases–as is always the case–and stay true to the compass as she navigates the seas to get to the booty! Highly recommended!
I must say I'm impressed author. No grammatical errors and I love how the character are built. Their attitudes and skills. Feels to me, I'm watching a pirate movie. I have always been into pirate moves but this is the first transmigration novel I have ever read and I must say, I like it. It's nice and I like the flow. I'm still reading tho. Everything is nice and in accordance but I'm not much into magic or occult stuff but I will make an exception to this lol. fighting author💪💪💪[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
For just two chapters, the Novel is pretty good so far. However, if I were to critique it: The backstory for revenge is very, very little. Sure, Roy was a bully to seb, but for what? We need Roy's backstory. Rn he is just a 1d character that's just there for the plot. Why does he hate seb to such an extent for Seb to want to kill him? this is the biggest plot hole so far. other than this, everything is fine apart from repetitive grammar here and there. Good job, and keep continuing on!
The writing quality and the grammar are superb. At the very least, readers will not have to sacrifice their brain cells to read this remarkable novel. As of now, the author has been publishing regularly, which is a big plus. This is the first time I'm reading a pirate-based novel and I must say I was hooked from just reading the first 2 chapters. Keep up the good work, author. I'm excited to see how Bastian and his all-female crew mates conquer the seas!
Its too early to decide where this is going. But 5/5 stars. My Pirate Wives already is quite dark and portrays bullying and violence. It is clear that the main character, Sebastian, has been through a lot of abuse in his life, especially at the hands of his brother. The characters seemed to be well prepped for the story, it is well written and engaging. I am assuming this is a revenge story and I hope that you show both worlds later on, add a nice twist of events. Good luck, I will be a future reader! Justice for Sebastian! 🍻
Honselty it was a good read I haven’t much pirate stories so this was new for me. However sone things I would like the author to do going forward is to shed some light on his wives I mean add some chapters for each of them only where they bond with seb. In my opion you can do this by adding some POV switches which would flesh them out more in my opinion. Also I hope to see them exploring the world more. Anyway it was a great read and the novel had potential. Give it a try.