KevinWalters
Just a short review. Grammar, so many mistakes, 1/10. World building, honestly it is a mess, 3/10. Characters, for 100 chapters are static, 3/10. Story, well it is ordinary, nothing new here 4/10. Overall 3/10. As a side note, pneumonia can be cured, and the sickness can last up to 3 months not 6 years. Unless you are unlucky and the illness takes a severe form which, if not treated immediately, it is fatal. Author do research next time.
idiotic mc,hard to understand mc, hypocrite mc and an mc who don't have an common knowledge that even an 5 year old child knows and though other than the useless st*pid mc,slightly good grammar with slightly bad choice of words though this one can be excuse after all it's not like everyone is good at English and also everyone makes mistake after all,many chapters good a interesting story with st*pid mc and also the reason why this rate overall is 3.8 because of the mc! I freaking can't stand him at all
I don't write reviews but I am gonna try this time. Well the MC is very hard to understand and he/she just does whatever they want and the side characters are just plain stupid they do things so that the MC can look cool like for example a restaurant customer is your reservation is not here and than the manager barges in apologizes to the MC and fires the employee it is fine if it has 1 aor 2 such scene in like 10 ch but this is like every single chapter which I don't like and than instead of overpowering their opponents the MC just drags the fight until it is tiring ( I am speaking about chapters over 100) 1 to 99 ch is pretty good i think