My Online Girlfriend Is The Nine Heaven Divine Phoenix

Really bad transalation, good story line, some logical inconsistencies, but other than that, this story is pretty much a 10/10.Definetly recomended.Need an editor though.

can you guys recommend me something like this, with an OP fml/girlfriend....................................................................

Ta muy bueno y el desarrollo es el mejor espero que sigan así y ver mas contenido como este, mis alagos a las personas que hicieron esta novela

Well overall the story is amazing, I read the synopsis and was like what but it breaks the world in pretty easy not fast not to slow the character plot between the romance Mcs is decent and refreshing. The cultivation aspect is also nice and not totally broken so far, so amazing respect on that with the system in play. With the training aspect breaths fresh bits in every few chapters which is nice I have next to no complaints besides the very few translation errors one of which is more of a personal preference since it was a group reference instead of a individual one. But I’m sure not a example of perfect English with a review like this, hahaha.

Not a story I expected to read but found it enjoyable read nonetheless. Needs a comedy tag and definitely is a possible romcom. The MC is vicious yet more humane than most characters in this novel. Honestly think that this web novel is fantastic enough for more chapters but only time can tell. I highly recommend reading this web novel and enjoying the short 40 chapter binge ride. Adding this web novel to my reading list.

the story is a bit slow to start and is slow paced but the character building is great so far, but it could use some more world building and not so much of a constant focus on the main character

#####################################################################################################################################################################

better than most of the trash coming out this time around

Really, really good! This is now my favorite MC. This novel is hilarious! The main character is realistic and not the typical dense protagonist. Translation is okay but could be better. It’s still better than most novels on here at least. You know you like a story when your face hurts because you’ve been grinning like a fool the entire time. I need more, give it!!

although this type of system is not new and there are a few cliches here there it's still written very well so that doesn't matter too much.

I cannot say anything about updating because it is trial, but I really liked the first 40 chapters. Authors other book is also fantastic, so I have really high expectations on this one. Really hope this gets picked. And quickly!!

this is a pretty good novel with an interesting system the characters seem real and thought out if you guys want this to be picked added it to your library.

although this system style novel isn't new and the beginning is a bit cliche the characters and the story are really well done.

nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nmnj j j j j j h g f dfctrcttv x hbvysyb j jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjisjxnj

Reveal spoiler

A promising story. For those who like system novel with cultivation world, and romance, this novel is pretty good. it also made me laugh some time 😹

This is a good comedy, hope it got picked soon. Though it will became repetitive if the author still use their misunderstanding for comedy. By the way, here a comic meme for you all.

It's good............................................................................................................................................................

i really enjoy this book rrevnjrbrvevevev3vevevbevevvebbe3bebebebebebebebebebebebebebebebebebebwbevebeveeveevvevebgevgeewvevevebebebebebebebeb

I hope this work get pick up, it’s a great work afterall.