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The story took such a nose dive at chapter five and six. itβs one if not the worst and most annoying cliche plots that always get used in these types of stories, even though it completely ruins it. It was really promising but that just completely ruined it for me. itβs a dumb and incredibly un-original plot point.
so I don't normally do reviews or leave comments but this book so far has me hooked. I really enjoy how the author does the reincarnation and doesn't make the mc super op right out the gate. Can tell that mc will be op as story progresses and that there could be a few love interests in the future. really looking forward to how this story progresses, keep up the good work
TLDR, This stories like a writing project a 7th grader would turn in and get a C for. Interesting at first, cliche after cliche, to instant power-up and time skip, to adventuring with no clear purpose but a slight hero complex, no clear understanding of how strong the MC is. Apparently he's a "Sage" but we never really get a clear understanding of the world's power scale and how strong a "sage" is supposed to be, from what I can see so far he seems like a 2nd rate magician with a few single and multi-target spells, nothing that can kill over 10 people really. He kills completely evil people like slavers who killed his father and (maybe r*ped his mother? author was never clear) also killed his mother, or a fat old noble lady who threw one of her slaves to be r*ped by 3 men then killed, then shoved a fire poker up the bum of the other cat girl. But then feels bad and like he wasn't supposed to do that. He gets on the wrong side of a receptionist because of his naiveness who starts discriminating and bullying him even sending him to a brothel and a recommendation to one of those male-like female cliche characters. He then stays there despite paying more or less the same as a normal inn despite knowing where some normal inns are (place he stayed at when he first came in the city). Theres alot more stupid stuff like this to read in this book but ill end it here otherwise this review wouldnt be readable. It's not bad to have a few cliches and unlikeable characters, you just have to balance it out with your own original ideas and interesting plot points. For example, it doesn't make sense for the receptionist to be mad at the MC for so long, or the MC to just sit there and take her abuse without easily clearing things up, or to be staying in the brothel like hotel for so long when there are clearly other options for the same price. You could have at least gave a destination for the MC other than "wandering around relying on plot armor for lucky encounters". For example, finding some lost relic of the succubus race that his mother had, or seeking out his fathers sister in the capital to check up on her and write from there. These are some basic examples but a little can go a long way.
amazing well built plot and world building that will draw you in. Author is also so gente to provide readers a map in every chapter comment section, and it works wonderfully. Lots of unique, funny, quirky characters, and I feel like a lot more has to be introduced yet. SPOILER ALSO I'M ANSIOUSLY WAITING FOR WHEN HE FINALLY DO SOMETHING WITH THIA!
this novel has really good world and character building, and the plot is also really good! the only problem is that the grammar is a bit messed up at parts but its understandable. really liking this so far, author seems to have an idea of what hes doing, im in boi. this junior brother hopes senior brother will take the trouble of coming along on this journey with him!
This novel was one of a kind. The kind that inspires me to write more. The grammar, well let's just say more wisdom and knowledge to the author to create perfect English grammar. The same also with me π. So this review was to encourage the author not to give up. The best is yet to come and I know you will become the best version of yourself. Kudos and good luck! Awesome story so far!
Posting another review because apparently I made the auto-mod mad. This novel is one of my favorite novels. Chapters are long, good, and the cliffhangers don't make me want to murder someone. MC is anti-harem (I think), and the side characters all have their 'thing' (I'm looking at you Bromur with your Mr. Krabbs laugh)