My Multiverse Trip

Let me be honest , the MC is confusing . I mean really how do you have literally the key to be well as amazing as you want be but still end up so stupid? I will tell you this the MC acts almost unnatural for some of his decisions are just stupid . I get wanting to have a challenge but really there are so many better options

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I'm still in the early parts. Harry Potter seems to be copy pasted from somewhere with another format and little add-ons added. It's an unedited, headache inducing read. Hopefully it gets better.

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This has to be the best thing I've read yet. I didn't like most of the anime/novel you wrote about, but you "fixed" all the problems I had such as them being way to long with way too much filler. I love that you changed through the stories fast enough that nothing was boring. The jokes have to be the best part it works perfectly I never went more than a few chapters without laughing.

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I am fine with everything this book has but, PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, USE COMMAS, I HAVE SEEN PARAGRAPHS WHERE THEY DONT GET A SINGLE PUNCTUATION, IM GOING TO PULL MY HAIR OUT!

I’v read till chp 10 and there’s a few problems i just wanna point out. Mc had 3 wishes and since he did not want to be op he chose 3 systems which is weird and nerfed them too but it’s fine and then he wanted to start off as a baby so he wants to start from scratch, fine too. He choose the harry potter world tho. He said he wanted girls from different worlds and harry potter is like the bottom of the food chain, i guess he wants to be asbolutely trash first? Then the following chp mc is happy that his looks are good and not too attention seeking like other mc where they have white hair and red eyes which he dislikes because of oogling young masters that’ll cause problems for mc risking his and his family/lovers life which i think is stupid. The young masters will cause trouble bc of the attention seeking looks but they WILL definately cause more trouble if mc has tons of beautiful girls as his lovers and since this novel’s mc wants beautiful girls as his harem, he will attract those young masters attention anyways and because of that i think it was stupid to wish for 3 systems and not save 1 for a op power that can protect mc and his family/lovers. Don’t give me the excuse that he does not want to be op, he will eventually be op and he needs to be op if he wants to protect them and he can just not use it unless in emergancies. Next problem is the reason he chose harry potter world is bc the world is not that strong yet he starts from scratch AND he added characters from fanfics making the future different so he just fked up himself. Would u rather go to harry potter with characters from fanfics so basically u dont know ur future and from a baby or a world like against the gods that goes just like the manhua. Btw he could choose his birth family so he could choose any family from against the gods too. I would have chosen against the gods idk abt u but my choice is way better to me.

The plot is good and the story is decent too, but I must warn you that the grammar is bad. The paragraph are so long that it's a headache and there are no punctuation. One more thing is that he is supposed to have the mentality of a 40 yr old but even while having all that knowledge acts like an average student(first arc) I lost it when he got average marks at everything while also being bad at politics and trickery when he had a treasuretrove of knowledge. He literally used RoR not to learn high level spell, no he used it to sell the old potions

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Yo love the story, it's quite rare to find fast story and enjoying and not boring at the same time. Love the comedic scene specially the rule breaking ones like cultivation 101 hahahahaha.Overall a great story, and also your other book I'm a fan now thank you for giving good fanfic

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The mc changes 180 in every arc... in the start he state that he does not want a big harem or act like a young master.. it is what he becomes, before he gets ****t by wifes and families and is beta.. just dont waste time on it

Basura total. Lo Único bueno es que hablan de Harry Potter y mencionan a otros personajes segun convenga sin darle un trasfondo a la serie o relevancia alguna, luego se vuelve repetitiva y muy tediosa diciendo que va a hacer esto y lo otro y termina haciendo lo contrario a largando cosas que se deberían de acortar para centrarse en la trama y dar sentido a la novela n general y no hablar de (R18) yo no lo vi para nada y si hubo fue tan aburrido que me durmió. Empocas palabras sáltense esta mierda hay mejores novelas de Harry Potter en el canal de web novel solo busque y evítense la pena de leer esta cosa.

Sir can i request a apocalypse type world like resident evil for survival with a normal body so there will be a trill thanks for a wonderful novel by the way. Love it the way the story goes and i hope that there is more chap to come.

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the worst protagonist I have ever seen in my life, his Cheats are not used, his skills only exist on paper because he does not use them, it was better to give the systems to a street rat that would be much more interesting the story....