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My Magical System

Author: Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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wisefox
wisefoxLv2

I gave this 5 stars because it has a way of keeping me wanting more. Grammar, slow story or too op mc doesn’t t matter to me but the plot and story does and this is definitely a 5 star story/plot (to me anyways). -keep up the great work author

HEHE_anime
HEHE_animeLv10

Such a nice book to read. If I will have to recommend a single book it would definitely be this one. Great story to read. You're imagination will really work............

Joe_3031
Joe_3031Lv3

how do u justify having chapters behind a paywall whrn u dont upďate regularly?

Dannick_Nzimi
Dannick_NzimiLv1

I think it overall good and the writing quality is iffy but if you look past that and the weird mix of Chinese and Japanese stereotypes then it really is one of the best

magmabeam
magmabeamLv10

I'm on the 10th chapter and I am ready to read the rest of it to find out how he becomes OP and more mature as a person. It shows you how a normal person who uses games as a way to escape is like getting transmigrated. I feel like the grammar is a little low but I see it improve I as keep reading. I hope this novel does well as it seems to have a lot of chapters in it.

boby_flay
boby_flayLv12

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Bayowa_Mary
Bayowa_MaryLv1

I really love the novel Please author can you write about what happened during the banquet, I'm really curious. Thanks 😊😊👍😊😊😊😊😊👍😊😊😊👍

duzztauz_tauzduzz
duzztauz_tauzduzzLv1

a historia é boa e bem interessante estou proximo ao capitulo 100 mas seria bom se soubecemos mais sobre o mundo e está claro que o pais do prota é forte em um continente ou algo assim eu diria tipo meio cliche mas posso estar errado, fico triste porque essa historia deveria ser mais comentada ou algo do genero é muinto boa

Goblin_1000
Goblin_1000Lv4

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fswmoq80
fswmoq80Lv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

Werewolf_Redmoon
Werewolf_RedmoonLv15

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Daoist204928
Daoist204928Lv4

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Rolling09
Rolling09Lv2

moreee, i need moree .................................................................................................................................

Dan_Costinel
Dan_CostinelLv11

It's very interesting how mc get his game system,how his girlfriend was not a bitch and how he become from weak to op [img=coins][img=coins]

LuciferBloodfallen
LuciferBloodfallenLv2

I really like this book have been keeping an eye on the updates but still the wait is too long. but I wanna read more of what happens. hope more uploads frequently

SoulCore876
SoulCore876Lv15

After 219 Chapters of what I've read I can most positively say that the Author of this novel needs to learn proper grammar, to small sentence structures and most of all the thought dialogues of the characters within the novel that use Single Quotation Marks instead of Double Quotation Marks for talking dialogues.

RealityWarper
RealityWarperLv4

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BILLY_Dores
BILLY_DoresLv2

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minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3

That goes straight into my library. The start was surely very interesting. I hate heartbreaks, though. I really hate it when best friend cheats. I hope he gets revenge for it. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.

Epialess
EpialessLv4

Don’t waste your time reading this author’s books as he never completes them and drops them whenever he thinks the views have dropped. If you don’t believe me check his profile.