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It is rare to come across with a love story with a realistic plot. At any point of your life you might've seen a couple like Derek and Taaliyah- childhood sweethearts and how their love blooms. But what makes this story different from others? the relatable scenarios. The school life, friends and family, everything feels relatable. The author did a great job in portraying the emotions of the main leads without any fail. The world build-up and the supporting characters arcs are well written and I must say that, this book got a way to attract the reader's attention. Kudos to author for coming up with a refreshing idea. I am rooting for you, Hwaiting 👍❤️❤️❤️
This story has really touched my heart........... I feel like I'm addicted to it. It represents the difficulty of the children and their changes in their puberty. It also shows the evolution of the love between two friends. It also shows the daily problems between the elders... Overall, It's really a beautiful and heart-touching novel......
I was easily pulled in by the synopsis, the small excerpt especially. Lol what a tease that was. The story is nicely written and the author has a good and understandable writing style. Sometimes I got a bit confused but as I read on things got more clear. I'm looking forward to continuing the journey of Derek and Taliyah or is it Taaliyah? (Dear author, The name in the synopsis and novel is different) Overall, this is also a hidden gem that has the potential for greatness and tremendous success. [img=recommend]
The story is good. Plot is interesting. Characters are young i guess the main story after this childhood background which makes me want to know what happens sooon. The background setting of the story is great, it is so real and vivid that reader can see it. But update daily so that we can keep and proofread too. Great story.
The story appears to be happening in a new, interesting and very novel setting. I loved the tiny details, I love how food are presented, all the images used are on point, there is a great background information, especially the families, traditions, their beliefs and the system. The language is also simple and good. I cannot wait to read more and find what happens to the characters. the combination of teacher and a singer, it's going to be a bang ! please update daily author.
The story has real and original plot. I wonder how author came up with such a realistic story. The narration is great. The emotions are authentic, images are vivid, the language is simple, the descriptions are wow and change of scene from one to another, i like how the author has detailed it and make it clear about what is happening in the chapter. The characters and story, its very relatable too. Thank you author for such a sweet story.
It's a lovely story. I especially like the plotline, which isn't that far away from being realistic, and it's not cliché. The characterization was nicely done, as the characters' traits and behaviors are too human and relatable. The story development was good, and so was the world background. I couldn't say much about the writing style since it was well-written. There were only a few minor errors at some parts as it was still good and doesn't affect the story that much. I also admire the Author for keeping up a stable update of chapters. I wish you the best of luck, Author!
A refreshing plot line with romance between a teacher and a singer🤩. The details of the story are described in a well manner especially the family setting. I love the stories where authors try to take the families also along with the main couple lives. Do check this story and enjoy this lovely romantic story. All the best author for this contest😘. Saranghae❤️