My Long Lost Mate

This sounds like a good book that I can't wait to read. There are sooooo many books to read. It is read to decide which one to read first. Ugh!

To be honest, I hadn't read any werewolf novels before so this is my first time into this genre. So far, I can say author-sama is very descriptive which is pleasant and helpful because while I read, I could picture every single word. Pretty much a captivating work. Fun Fact: I was mesmerized and heel over heels for the novel that I failed to recognize Author-sama wrote in the first person. Quite Unique per se. In short, this novel is soon to be a masterpiece.

A werewolf love story is always fascinating. The writing quality is good, and the author has been updating this novel regularly. Total 5 score. Recommend this book for those who love werewolf stories!

The book is definitely an interesting one. I enjoyed it, especially how the book began. I am definitely looking forward to how the book progresses.

I love reading books about werewolves. I have read hundreds of books based on them and yours doesn't disappoint at all. It's well written. All the best!

The story is very well written, and the dialogue flows naturally. A very interesting and gripping story! Can't wait to see more of this! Keep on writing, Author! Best of luck.

Great work!! I have always liked to read werewolves story, and this one hits different!! The plot is very interesting, and I can't wait to see more of this! ❤️

The novel is about werewolves, Alpha and Beta and so on. The story of Luke the wolf and Violet a human, is unfolding nicely in every chapter. They have a nice love story that can melt your heart. The Author knows how to write an engaging story. Keep it up!

First of all, this was really enjoyable to read. I like how you paced the progress of this story and unravel info regarding your genre and theme (which is of course a werewolf and human soulmate romance) without giving so many info in a chapter called info-dumping. I can't really give well-thought-out comments regarding the characters since the story is still new but I really like Violet, she's quite a dearie. All while there needs some fixing with the grammar and all, I do think that with practice and improving one's skill will come gradually: always keep trying! Anyhow, thanks for writing such a wonderful story!

I think it a very interesting thing you've done with the use of the werewolf genre actually, I like it a lot so far. I'm not normally one for the supernatural stuff, but this one actually keeps my attention so I actually like it a lot, I'm only 5-in so far so I can't comment too much on grammar, because all stories even after they're done are a work in progress I edit and re-edit like my life depends on it so with that being said as far grammatical and tense stuff that's just a small nitpick that doesn't take away from the over all entertainment the story provides for me so far so great job, and I'm gonna keep on reading to see what you do! :)

Really loved the story, the flow of plot and the smooth character design. There were a few punctuation errors but nothing major to hinder you from enjoying your reading time.

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I'm not someone whose read a lot of werewolf stuff before, bit this was interesting. I'll have to give you props on the intrigue and the pacing, though there were a few issues I had. Let me preface the following worth the fact that I've only read the first three chapters for now. I won't say much of the grammatical issues. A lot of us, including me, are not native English speakers and so I'll give you some leeway there and only say that there are issues present. Something you can do other than the grammar is to remove the POV markers. You shouldn't have to tell the reader whose POV you're switching to. I mean, if you aren't able to show who's the one through which we're seeing the story in the first few lines, then the POV markers make sense, but try to just not have them in the story Some of your paragraphs when it came to description could be split up into multiple ones and elaborated on a little. The room descriptions in chapter 3 for example. Currently they just kinda look like a big block of text. Her father's abusiveness in the nightmare felt way too sudden and off. You should maybe look into that. Lastly, thank you is two words, not one lol. But yeah, I feel like with a little bit of work, this story can shine. Keep it up!

Writing Quality- {[4]} I have no problem when it comes to the writing style of the author. I believe it is unique, and does not require any changes or shifts to it. When it comes to the writing quality, I've noticed a few mistakes, a single round of proofread won't fix this. I know it is tiring to proofread but with patience, you can correct these mistakes in that way, you can hone your skills as an author. Alongside these mistakes that I had seen, are punctuation marks and grammar errors. Although, I have to compliment the author for the vocabularies. They are splendid. Stability of Updates {[5]} When it comes to the stability of update, I automatically rate it five. One reason is because I prefer quality over quantity and it is not entirely necessary to force yourself to upload a chapter a day. A little rest, a little snack will do the thing. Story Development{[5]} The development is smooth. I love the plot too, it is interesting, captivating, one that can grab your attention and just make you long for more chapters. I've got to say, I don't read this types of novels but it did grab my attention. Character Design{[5]} Here, the author does an excellent job in explaining the looks of the characters. One can portray their apparel, features, complexion in a few paragraphs. Here, I will also include the emotions. Emotions were portrayed very well, I can feel what the MC is feeling as if I was in the novel, hiding somewhere in the background. World Background{[5}] Scenarios/scenes are described precisely. The setting, you can imagine how it looks in a few paragraphs or so. Vivid, absolutely vivid and now I'm just running out of words to compliment and praise the author. (For me at least since I love imagining stuff) Overall: 4.8 This is an honest review since I'd love to help you! -DZSC

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I am really very very impressed by the story so far. My first novel was a werewolf romance as well. I love how the way you described the characters and everything seems to be in sync. Keep up the good work.:)

I really enjoyed the first few chapters that I read, they were good and enjoyable and can't complain all that much. The story itself is unique and I love it, especially because it has werewolves in it👍👌.

It is indeed an interesting piece of work about romance stories between werewolves, not many that you can find on web novel. Furthermore, the writer has a fluent story that is comfortable to read. Strongly recommended~

Nice story... Cool idea and story plot. Recommended to read and looking forward for more chapters ❤️❤️ please keep on writing Author-san 😊😍

I don't know but, I feel excited with this story. I have always like the stories about wolves and might gonna like this one. Keep on writing this author :)