My life revolves around you

It was a very pleasant read. The MC is very likeable and I'm looking forward to her relationship with the ML and of course I will be back for more spicy scenes! Keep up the fighting spirit author!( ˶˘ ³˘(⋆❛ ہ ❛⋆)!♡

Your story is really great and descriptive. I love how you build the emotions of MC. MC would go through a lot..but it is a nice novel ...A sweet touch of romance and modernism. It is highly recommended. More power to you writer

Take chances and we often makes mistakes . That's how the story grows. Pain nourishes the courage and it will help us to be brave. Keep up the good work and Rooting for more stories to come!

What an interesting and different story, The world bullieding is just amazing, the characters design is just perfect. Keep up the good work author.

Okay, sixteen chapters down, time to give a review. This book has two things I like, it's fast-paced and very detailed. We don't miss any vital information and we understand why Yang Jiang acts the way she does. Now, what I don't like is the writing quality. The writing style is cool but some sentences had iffy grammar useage. Some use of collective pronouns too like in the 12th chapter where "much" was used instead of "many." I love her descriptions of things, it tells me a lot about her personality but there is also a lot of info dumping in one sentence. The readers know that you have a lot to say but take your time and explain it to us. One sentence shouldn't occupy ten lines. Try using simple sentences for description so you'll be able to get straight to the point. A sentence should at most be five lines in length. Lastly, the dialogue structures. When you're writing, put a person's sentence in one paragraph, don't join several people's replies and questions in one paragraph. It was making it difficult for me to figure out who was talking at certain points in time. Overall, I loved the story. The pacing and character design wad good, I could tell what this person was like and could do from a few words of description. That's something most authors can't do, so keep that up.

The story is nice. The author also has a high level in future. I hope he/she continues to make it and make us all entertained. May the stars align.

So upon reading the overview and the first 10 chapters, I have this to say; •Solid Characters •Interesting Plot There are a few things holding back this story though. This is merely my opinion, but the story could be organized a bit better. Dialogue separated from the regular first POV text. some of the paragraphs could be broken up. I am assuming that this is your style, but the short chapters are more of a detriment than an asset. While your overall writing is good, the shortness of the chapter leaves more to be desire. As I continue reading and reviewing perhaps things will change.

I love your story title, the cover of your book is amazing. the plot is cool, All scenes are very well organised, I hope you complete your story because of someone is curious about the end. Thank you.

Very good story and a beautiful writing and full of emotion keep writing and waiting for more.

Great characters 👌 👏 though the book has some errors at the start the latter parts are very interesting , added to library can't wait to see the story development 😀 keep it up author.