My Journey Alone

This is a story of a guy named August who had the courage to ask out his childhood friend only to find find out she was already in a relationship but as he thought nothing could get worse...holes started appearing on the ground and corpses started to come out of them...the world turned upside down. (please point out my mistakes)( book cover is not mine if you created it and want it taken down let me know) I'll continue writing this once I figure out my plan for this because right now its just a plain mess, and I was planning on dropping it, but I'll try to figure something out.