imma nope out of it here. Your trying to condense a brilliantly crafted origin story into a 1000 words, but i'm sorry you have failed miserably. The MC has took his frustrations out on the wrong person, should have maybe waited until he was attacked again until he snapped. The whole joker transformation does not happen in an instant it takes a long time and if you watch the film you will see it only happened towards the end and even then he isn't fully transformed. The whole laughing thing doesn't work the joker had a legit reason to laugh during a ****ed up scenario whereas the MC is acting psychotic after murdering the only person who loved him because... she was berating him for almost dying. Alot, is wrong with this and not a lot is right...
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Wow, just... Wow, the story itself is quite intriguing. From wanna be hero to psychopath mass murderer. This novel is good, now for the review. -Bad things- World, the world itself doesn't appear to much. Only times a see something about the world/backround is when the MC (Izuku) is going to kill. Character design, the character design is bland. As it does explain the major roles and side characters including the MC (Izuku) it doesn't explain it too good. -Good things- Grammar, *slow handclap* just wow... The Grammer itself is good, really good! I found no mistake while reading the 10 chapters. Updates, the story is finished. While the story may have not so many chapters it's still a gem. You can read the whole thing in a span of 30 minutes to an hour.