My Hermes System

Well this is a well worth 4 stars book.. read it to Chapter 91 and so far little action and story progression, way too slow pace for me.. I am not gonna drop the book cause its actually good.. and i advice people to unlock chapters as you reading In case you wanna skip some boring chapters, wish i did that... . writing and updates thats 5 stars,, story development and world background 3 stars,, character design 4 stars... So to conclude this review if You want a long term book where everything has to be explained by multiple chapters, good updates, good grammar, where each arc are probably 300+ chapters, each Known people need there own 6 chapters, And a speedster mc well this for you...

Overall I found it to be an entertaining enough read but it is not without it's flaws. The first thing I found rather jarring and kept taking me out of the story is the focus on eyes way too much. "He squinted , He blinked his eyes ( the latter part is unnecessary), His eye twitches . idk if it's purposely done by the author but I found it quite annoying how much people are squinting or eyes twitching. Another thing that I was weirded out by was the lying done by the MC. Makes no sense , has no reason , and is immediately figured out. What's the point? it's annoying , stop giving fake names for no reason. Lastly , I feel like the chapters are way too short for premium, some chapters hardly anything ever progresses plot wise and it feels bad paying for little progress.

its good.. the only problem.. i need more ahhahaha, really liked the story, if only the MC was a little more focus on learning(personal opnion) it would be better, but really like it

I really like this book so far. I can't wait to see how the MC will develop. To me, right now, it seems his character could go multiple ways. Great story so far.

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Interesting concept. This story is very interesting so far since it has a strong beginning and I hope to see it continue to progress. I hope the story does not die out or the MC becomes to OP after around 30-50 chapters or even if he doesn't I hope it is not to ridiculously OP. All in all keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what else you have in story for us readers.

All that suffering the main character went through, all the death, all for it to be irrelevant. The book was a waste of time. I really had high hopes for this

I really did enjoy this book.. it was rushed towards the end… but this was literally the first Webnovel I had ever read. It put me on the paths of other Webnovels. I’ll be one of the many that will definitely comeback to see Van in action..

The story is good but going into each new volume ruins it. Author completely changes the story and all of a sudden MC is stuck in a place there was no hint of earlier, with nothing to do with anyone previously known. The direction of the story completely changes and it feels like it would be better to right a new book. It feels like author wants to put absolutely everything in the story even if it doesn't fit and it frankly ruins it. I would say read the free chapters but I don't suggest buying the chapters as the entire arc comes to a crash and burn and you feel like you wasted money. tldr just read free chapters

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Villain retirement and My Hermes System are two of the best novels I've ever read. I just can't believe more people aren't reading them. I absolutely love the writing style and the main characters in both. An amazing author really and I hope he continues to write Villain Retirement and makes his new novel even better.

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The story is fantastic but the problem is that the author is not updating anything for the past few weeks... And I don't even know if he dropped the author dropped it or not...

Amazing read. First review I have left for a novel on this app. All I can say is this has been a novel I can not put down. Not sure why people started dropping it later in the novel.

I really hope the author can upload the chapters daily. He only upload the chapters like 2-3 chapters per week[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The book is really good it's just that the author is not updating in fast enough... So author please update this book fast 🥺🥺🥺... Also I really love your work so I will appreciate it if you don't drop it

i like the story a lot.. though at first i was hesitant to read because its kinda depressing at the start.. i read 1 chapter a day at first but then i can stop myself as i read on.. now i fell in love hook, line and sinker.. cant stop i'm gonna hold on to it..😄😄