Eluka12
I am not going to be so shameless to rate my own novel full stars... I will grade it how I see fit. writing quality 3. needs work... stability updates 5. I release every day! story development 4. could use a lot more work! Character design 4. I make each character unique! world background... this is a hard one I rate it 2 and a half if I could... I need to work on that!
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To be honest its not bad, but the MC really has no consequences for any of his actions, he does things on a whim which i dont think gives the story much depth, if your reading this story for the sex scenes then yeah its great albeit not very detailed, but to be honest at some point the sex overpowers the story making it all fall flat, unless sex is a major mechanic in the story then the MC shouldnt be doing it so much