Reviews of My Fusion System: Fusing a Thousand Chickens at the Start
My Fusion System: Fusing a Thousand Chickens at the Start
Snow Over A Thousand Hills
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Although concept is good....😅 but progress of plot is really bad & typical cliché at every point of story... so much cliché destroys the plot... & that dumb family is so dumb that I can't take it anymore...... every single one of them including mc...... MC be like: what can I do to against him, he's father..... _ you can blackmail him _ you can leave the house _ you can become head of family _ you can combine farmers to make a super farmer & your slave there's so much he can do but no dumb mc has dumb excuses for dumb family 😂
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Concept is good but has bad plot. MC has a gold fish brain. First he stated that he doesn't want to display his secrets to his family. Yet 1 chapter later, he openly use the system infront of many people. No Worldbuilding, author is just just write anything what comes to mind. Imagine how large of an area/food/water/barn is required to raise 1000 chickens? In a medieval setting? With 'poor' family background.
Why can't there be one good novel in the trial read... This MC is mentally challenged. He says one thing, but does something else. For instance, he monologues about how important it is to protect the secret of the system, but the very next chapter he does his very best to showcase his system to as many people as possible. If this wasn't enough, MC's family exist merely to create trouble, and be general nuisances all the time. They all behave as if they're the result of 15 generations of inbreeding. Somehow, the MC isn't much better either. How can a novel go so wrong.
First off, how tf is this so popular? One thing I absolutely abhor of the recent system novels, is that what self respecting system would willingly connect to MC’s like this? This one is a pervy idiot. I don’t know if it’s supposed fo be funny talking about his father and I quote, ‘ploughing his mother all the time’, but it really isn’t. MC is supposed to be 10. First chapter in, he’s checking out his 11 year old sister. I simply cannot fathom how people can read this. It’s disappointing that trial reads have fallen to novels like this. I guess content isn’t unlimited, but it is sad we are now scaping the bottom of the barrel now.
The family and the MC sadly have to share their single brain cell, but the author tries to make it look serious. The concept is nonsensical and the future of the story is bleak, but if the author recognized that and would have actually tried to make it funny it would have been a good read. Sadly it is just mediocre.
I have read a lot of novels and a lot of cliches, but it's rare I run into one that so dumb it hurts my head. Even when among other CN novels with system this one is just so special in how dumb it is. Even other novels had some kind of logic to the world they build and their character. Each character in this novel is flat, but also so absurdly stupid that the normal suspension of disbelief you would need for copy and past CN novels just can't bridge the gap.
