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This story is great. The plot is fantastic, and the characters are very funny. In the half a year since I started using this app, this is one of the best stories I have read. Although, after each chapter gets out, I feel like I want more ten of them after reading it, I am okay with the speed of releases as long as it isn’t dropped before reaching its end.
As a petty and gruesome person, I really want to have other people read this story even if just because I also feel terrible about it being dropped, but I would also like to register that I think the author has a great future in writing and he is a funny and intelligent person in the realm of writing if I ever saw one. And I just freaking read a horror novel, which was very good, thank ya, but his jokes made me smile and his characters made me care. I will prolly have some nightmares tonight, but I think it's worth it.
Don't read this story unless you want to be disappointed. By that I mean, the author has dropped it after only 21 chapters. Which isn't good news in general. Let alone because this story had marvelous potential. Some great characters, lots of humor and a steady pace where you got information and things happened, but you didn't get overwhelmed. Which as many authors and readers know, can be difficult to manage. If the author ends up coming back when things in RL have settled down and continues this story. Then I would highly recommend giving it a go. Otherwise read it and enjoy while knowing disappointment is quickly ahead as it suddenly stops as things start to get really interesting.
This is a great story. At the time of this review the author has 'dropped' the story, which is super common for any story on this site that is decent-good. The only con is that while this story is very engaging, the MC monologues inner thoughts a lot and with how little story there is, it leaves little plot development. It doesn't detract from the story, but it does mean there is less going on and more standing in a daze thinking. I have to say that from reading, the story line flows really smoothly. The plot, which in most cultivation novels branch out everywhere seemingly without direction, has a very clear path to progression. Here is hoping that the author rekindles their spirit for writing. I see that wile you stopped posting the story a few weeks ago, you are still reading on this site as of yesterday. ;)
ME! Taylor Swift I promise that you'll never find another like me I know that I'm a handful, baby, uh I know I never think before I jump And you're the kind of guy the ladies want (And there's a lot of cool chicks out there) I know that I went psycho on the phone I never leave well enough alone And trouble's gonna follow where I go (And there's a lot of cool chicks out there) But one of these things is not like the others Like a rainbow with all of the colors Baby doll, when it comes to a lover I promise that you'll never find another like Me-e-e, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh I'm the only one of me Baby, that's the fun of me Eeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh You're the only one of you Baby, that's the fun of you And I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-e I know I tend to make it about me I know you never get just what you see But I will never bore you, baby (And there's a lot of lame guys out there) And when we had that fight out in the rain You ran after me and called my name I never wanna see you walk away (And there's a lot of lame guys out there) 'Cause one of these things is not like the others Livin' in winter, I am your summer Baby doll, when it comes to a lover I promise that you'll never find another like Me-e-e, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh I'm the only one of me Let me keep you company Eeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh You're the only one of you Baby, that's the fun of you And I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-e Hey, kids! Spelling is fun! Girl, there ain't no I in "team" But you know there is a "me" Strike the band up, one, two, three I promise that you'll never find another like me Girl, there ain't no I in "team" But you know there is a "me" And you can't spell "awesome" without "me" I promise that you'll never find another like Me-e-e (yeah), ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh (and I want ya, baby) I'm the only one of me (I'm the only one of me) Baby, that's the fun of me (baby, that's the fun of me) Eeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh (oh) You're the only one of you (oh) Baby, that's the fun of you And I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-e Girl, there ain't no I in "team" (Ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh) But you know there is a "me" I'm the only one of me (Oh-oh) Baby, that's the fun of me (Eeh-eeh-eeh, ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh) Strike the band up, one, two, three You can't spell "awesome" without "me" You're the only one of you Baby, that's the fun of you And I promise that nobody's gonna love you like me-e-e
Interesting novel, very good for those who wants to laugh lots, the way its written makes it even better. Not too much chapters until now, but i did see a good potencial for this novel, it may turn out like LOHP (library of heavens path) or 'number one founder'. So if you like these two novels, i'd recommend this one to you as well.