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I do not mind an OP character/plot armor/system ect... Often times those are the selling points of the story and are often in the title. This story reminds me of the "spell is in english" story, in that we start out with the character with his plot armor/system and he goes about doing what those types of protagonists do. But then maybe the author ran out of things to write about and completely watered down his ability or maybe it is almost always off an and he does not want to use it even to save his life and the life of his companions/lovers. Sometime after he gets to the academy he enters a training camp that is rip whole out of some other story and then takes it into some other confusing weird direction. He gets drawn into some trial space with all his classmates where his instructors can not rescue them at all and then it really gets weird. I cant even comprehend a narrative of the events from this point.
I am fine with all the garbage novels being published on this site recently, but there has to be a limit somewhere. The leaps of logic and sheer stupidity of this book is astounding. What kind of novel is already contradicting itself the first few chapters?! The character design is also not just juvenile, but practicly extraterrestrial! Humans don't think or behave like this!
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