I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.
The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)
Well, I'm really sorry about your dad, but that doesn't change my opinion... Fanfic. All the action in the store is the same (when a new customer shows up). Also, I don't remember exactly because it's been a long time since I read it, but I definitely remember the problem with the MC and his Chinese stereotype persona. Well, the rating should have been 3.5-3.7, but you just deleted the reviews. Disappointment.
nah after few chapter author become stupid... mc action is logicless... mc have no motivation or ambition and have poor syndrome.. now 10 years after mc reincarnation everyone told him to behave well for family status and mc have way too much money still after coming to tower he complain that room is too big for him.. his sister still warned to keep his image but guess what mc does next-- he went to low class cafeteria.. and yes you can guess all this.. before reincarnation mc wanted best life after reincarnation he lost all motivation and jjust wanted to live and don't want to involve in anything magi related but guess what he doing poor like stuff despite being rice make it sound like ridiculas brro.... even chinese mc are not that cliche.... I mean what's wronge with living in big room or what's wrong with eating expensive food.. mc have like hundreds of millions every month and he doesn't knows how to spend... I mean my brain just can't process his foolish like actions... which made me drop this story as mc seems too ambitionless and stupid with poor syndrome ..
got hyped because it's "Shop-kind genre novel" highly disappointed to say the least. it lack shop interaction. at one point i forgot what this novel is about because his interaction with D is dominating the novel or his daily life that bring no real value aside from time waster. the moment we get shop interaction, it's kinda disappointing. for the past few chapters, i guess about ch 40+, the pace got slower and slower. it takes 1 chapter to explain 1 interaction at ch 60+. at one point, 1 chapter can be summed as "I can use Magic, no you don't don't you lie, i don't lie, I can't believe it, here's proof" that conversation didn't even take about 5 minutes if it's happening in real life