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Reviews of Ms Universe System

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Ms Universe System

LeftPinky

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  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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champilyn
champilynLv12champilyn

The story seems promising. Though there are some grammaTical error, it is not that bad. needs more chapters though, so please update more! πŸ₯° thanks for the hard work author!

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EIIipse
EIIipseLv2EIIipse

Astounding attention to detail. This is a must read for anyone interested in fantast. The author knows just when to pop and build tension. Good going!!

Left_Index
Left_IndexLv1Left_Index

**AUTHOR NOTE** For some reason, I cannot review on my main account. It gets deleted. > Fall from grace > MC won't just suddenly become strong > Milfs > Secret Identity Okay I think I ticked all the boxes, Enjoy < 3 Don't be afraid to leave a paragraph comment, I wanna talk to my readers and hear what you guys think.

meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2meixiaolian

There are few errors of spelling and capitalization but I can see there is a potential in this book due to the reason the author put a bit of background on "realms" and reading the definitions is intriguing. I dropped five stars for the reason that the author would improve. Great narration and lot of mysteries on the chapters.

Lee_Sparrow
Lee_SparrowLv4Lee_Sparrow

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

hazzz1234
hazzz1234Lv2hazzz1234

wish little jack was the mc..............................................................................................................................

Moongirl_Mich
Moongirl_MichLv11Moongirl_Mich

The Character of the little guy at the first chapter is fine the just need more emotions though words. But keep this up and continue I also don't know much about this but it is good to read. Please keep reading the novel there are still a lot of surprise waiting for you readers. I will continue and support you.

May_lion
May_lionLv2May_lion

awesome book. I can't stop reading. please upload more... I love the character design and the construction is on point. you're really good at this, please continue

Mister_Writer
Mister_WriterLv2Mister_Writer

The background of the story is good. I'm just confused as to why the author intended to include the part when the genius of the family was born as a Prologue chapter. Regardless, the story is promising and I'm waiting for the development of the story in the future chapters.

yu_chan_desu
yu_chan_desuLv2yu_chan_desu

another novel by leftpinky πŸ’– the novel has a rather intriguing note to it.. i am more of an FL book reader but i'm always up for some good ML books.. looking forward for more chapters dear author! you are improving and hoping for more colls to this new novel entry 😊

Chenguang_Jinjing
Chenguang_JinjingLv4Chenguang_Jinjing

craving for chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Tsukasa_
Tsukasa_Lv1Tsukasa_

The story's pretty interesting. The plot is graspable. But the writing could be better. I noticed a few grammatical mistakes that can be easily be fixed by sheer editing. This novel indeed has potential. I shall await your improvement.

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

Reveal spoiler

Loneknight4
Loneknight4Lv2Loneknight4

Nice.

BosMafia
BosMafiaLv4BosMafia

Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter

Hfsap
HfsapLv4Hfsap

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Eydsonpk
EydsonpkLv1Eydsonpk

Reveal spoiler

Zukashi_zuno
Zukashi_zunoLv1Zukashi_zuno

Reveal spoiler

Main_Island
Main_IslandLv3Main_Island

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KatanaEvans123
KatanaEvans123Lv10KatanaEvans123

I love this book! Little Jack sounds so cute like a small little sweet guy who has a big strong heart. he just teminds me of jack and the beanstalk jack, i love the story line and how much detail and tome has gone into this and how the author had made all the chapters clear, Its all neat and wrll written! i defiantly reccomend this book! Added to my collections!