Paschalinelily
First Reviewer! It must count... 4 chapters in and we can see how carefully designed author has brought this characters to life. Her description, word building and all... so on point. The title and cover, God bless my soul... her synopsis did enough to reel ñe in and keep me yearning to see how Zhang Liling was going to pursue her goals. FYI... love her funny little self. Me Fang is in for a change and d excerpt hahhhaa 🤣🤣🤣 Love it. Good luck in wsa Nice one 🎉
Disappointed!. At first storyline was consistent, but as time passed it kept on going back and forth as if the author was begging to brainstorm. Let's not forget about the constant "I WILL REPLACE THIS CHAPTER SOON ". The story now is just being dragged out. It truly seems the author just became uninterested in this story and so started a release of a new book. Just my thoughts, but if you just can't keep up with 1 or 2 books at a time what makes you think you can with 3. I followed the author's work thinking that because she had such a great book develop on " The hidden wife " it was going to be the same on the rest but look at me now 🤦🤦🤦
I only read less than 20 chapters and had to stop and vent. The FL is really annoying. She complains and whines nonstop about how wicked the stepmother is but does nothing for herself. I wanted to see some face slapping, but was utterly disappointed. Is this supposed to be the FL gets her revenge after she finds someone who is strong to back her up? In that case, I can skip.
Prelim review: The back story of health is refreshing and the current issue of human trafficking makes this story stands out from the other revenge stories. Good realistic dialogues makes it easier for readers to follow. I'd give 5 star for originality of issues and relatability. Providing a made up name for Country and district would have been good, rather than Country S etc. A good editing will make the story stronger in terms of literacy value.
The story is amazing. I don't know about others but I really felt relaxed reading this book. There is something about this novel that draws you in and I can't tell whether it is because of the lovely characters, the tone of the story or from something else. I am only a few chapters in and I am already in love with our savvy Zhang Liling. I love FL who stands up to anyone who dares bullies them and Liling is one of those FL. And Mr. Fang is hot. I can already tell that he will be a doting husband. Overall, I love the story and how it sucks me in. Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍