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Well thing is I did this myself so I kinda can't give myself a bad review but I'll be honest here the story itself isn't bad considering I did this cause I thought "hey why not" but you should try reading it though

There aren't many chapters to comment on yet, but from what I've read, the story is very interesting(actually looks very very good) and the storytelling is pretty effective to hook the reader in. It started as an interesting series and I think it will give the same excitement in the later chapters. Good job Author 👍👍

This is the best book I have ever read please keep up the good work though I have to say your updates are a bit slow and makes it feel like you've dropped it but I'm always happy to read

There aren't many chapters but I find this story interesting. Although the first line in the first chapter was a little dull for me. It didn't bring out the excitement I was thinking of after reading the title. It's still good though.

Hey there 👋🏻 This story... So far, as I got to read these few chappy chapters 📖 what I loved the most was the creative thinking of the very Author who had put the words forward in an unusual manner 👍🏻 Great work dear author 😌 keep working hard to attract the audience 😉 But what gave me hard time was that the little unsuitable punctuation marks left here and there😔 I'd kindly move to send the author a pretty lotta hands up for the book's lovely outcome ❤️ Sending loads of encouragements and wishes. Thank you! With love, OSM~

This is excellent!!! It's an exciting read. The stories are well told and it keeps the readers spellbound from start to finish. I have to write one hundred and forty words when just two or three lines and words are more than enough to express myself! I love the stories though and so I reiterate once again, good job. Kudos to the author

There is not much chapters so I cannot say a lot of the story other than this is a good start, the writing quality so far is good, good luck!