AnWan
I tried reading this, I really tried to drag myself through the grammatical errors and get past them, but they don't end. so if you're used to reading books with good grammar, as you should, you won't have a very good time with this book. The story is told in first person and the author/editor uses the wrong words for everything. good luck getting through this book unless you aren't used to reading English anyways.
I gave the story an as much of a go as I could, reading up to chapter 48, but I just can't anymore, the writing quality and sentence structure is abhorrent, which means the editor is either a retard or inexistent. Bit of a shame seen as the story had potential, however I refuse to subject myself to the torture any longer. I honestly can't fathom how it's achieved such a high ranking when it truly doesn't deserve it. I actually feel bad for the lower rated and less viewed stories, that they have been put underneath this steaming mound of shite is rather depressing.
it seemed like a interesting book and I manage to last 100chapters but then gave up, to read this you need to turn off your brain and ignore 99%things written. the language in the first 36chapters is definitelynot English, as I'm sure a 6 year old can write sentences better. After chapter 36 it actually becomes English but its still written by a 8 year old .. the MC is a weakling with crap growth. he chooses a monster with bad potential just because he didn't want to be tied to an organization, cool thats understandable but then stop b**ching about your weak monster. He picks a technique that is rarely studied as its extreamly painful but it can help you grow much stronger. Totally understandable but within 20-30chapters it becomes as common as dirt. The author has no idea how to explains wounds, in one fight MC had his spine broken yet can still continue fighting without bother. next fight both arms broken yet keeps fighting with no bother at all and even says that the prolonged fight is in his favor. Everyone around MC grows at faster pace than him even though their talents meant to be worse, and everyone babysits him. Also out of no where at all the author decided to add swearing into the chapters which just feels totally out of place. not to mention how the MC is pure h*rndog who can't sleep after seeing a girl in a swimming suit.
don't read this book. don't waste your time here . This book has an interesting concept but character development is zero. MC is stupidly kind his so called friends but those friends only get what they want from him don't return anything. MC is still weak after 2000 chapters. I hate his friends if it was me I wouldn't called them friends. Author is feminist but choose a man as MC then destroying whole story with powerful women and useless MC. Romance is one of the worst part. MC is so forgiving after facing so many unfair things. No character development. It won't get long time to person to become cold after facing unfairness of society. I completely changed facing harsh reality of humanity after 6 months. So to me it looks unrealistic to see MC is being same stupid , naive character after years. Author is really inexperienced. Anyway I'm going to drop this story. Bye author.
you have over 1000 chapters out but don't consider investing time and effort to revamp this whole novel? there are actually people giving this a 5 star? how can you give something a 5 star rating if you can't even "decipher" what the content of the novel is? the writing is so bad after you read !!!ONE!!! sentence you have to first think AND guess what it could mean and then re-translate it in your head. just let that sink in for a bit. i tried and tried but chapter after chapter it just got worse and worse. i just can't anymore. definitely dropped.
Its all about Showers, cooking, chew chew and Puchi Puchi…. You will understand what i mean once you read it. often🧐🧐 the author mixes up the names. Story line is good, steady growth and good world build. The most constant thing in the story has always been the Pain and his yelling to grow stronge… The author Highly advocates “No Pain No Gain”
Writing quality gets better but still not good quality but the problem is old chapters are not updated from the horrible state they are. There are occational mistakes due to carelessness and numbers and names have inconsistency. Story even being interesting is very repeatative and unbalenced. MC gets upgrates through near death struggle that is suppose to make him OP according to the flow of story and world development. But he stays behind the top and it repeats again and again. A M MC going through pointless struggle to death and S author tormenting him and us by showing his struggle and saying he got OP but, then show he is average and repeat the cycle. There are too many systems that the auther keeps bringing and discarding without proper implementation and explaination. Power level is not clear. It ia just streching again and again. Update is super frequent. But quality can be better and number, names and facts can be consistant if a little care is given in proof reading.
This story might have potential, but by all that is holy, I can't feckin find it. I tried. I really did, but I couldn't get past chapter 10. If I had to compare the grammatical prowess of the editor to a functioning member of society, it would be equal to Jeffrey Dahmer. I gave myself a migraine attempting to process the massacre of the english language that is this story. If this story is ever picked through by actual editor, I might come back. It's highly unlikely, however, given the ptsd I am developing after walking through the literary equivalent of Auschwitz.
I've read about 30 chapters or so and quite honestly this is one of the worst written stories I've ever read. The grammar is atrocious, filled with mistakes that microsoft word could've picked up. For a story written in the first person I've yet to once hear the MC thoughts on what he feels about certain things everything is just stated as a fact and nothing adds up. He will say one thing only to immediately contradict himself at every possible chance. The idea of the story was a great but terribly executed. All the characters have no personality and everyone just speaks in facts and sound like robots placed in the story to make the world building come from something a character "said".
excellent in nearly every way except for 2 huge huge flaws...... 1 updates are super inconsistent.... super inconsistent .... and 2 ... everyone can see he gets stronger and stronger but he gives away so much to make everyone else 3x stronger and omg I can barely win u less I get stronger and wow I almost died but ill be better next time ..... but his strength slowly increases but all others breeze by him without anything wrong? ..... he has a core... pseudo bloodline... monster... inheritance... and so much more than others but he is weaker... why? going by the arbitrary guidelines for others he should be 3x stronger than nearly anyone else but is kept weak for what purpose.....why...
I like this story quite a bit, but the grammar is ****. You got an editor, good job! This editor does a ****ed up job, not so good! You still keep him and post these chapters with A LOT of grammar errors, you are a bit of a retard! You go premium and I heard the grammar is still crap... what does that make you? Find your own answer and at least try to fix this problem, I think that without it this novel is interesting and would attract many more readers. Please stop with this half-assed job and write better (you could rework on your grammar and use of "the") (English is not my main language and still this bothers me, I don't even want to fathom how much it annoys others)